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Oh, Go Away Yesterday

Oh, go away yesterday! Seven, very restless and acting mostly on a whim He’d always called on dad, to teach or play with him But always got “I’m busy”, with dad’s countenance dim                 Oh, go away yesterday! Consumed by conflicting emotions, days would go by His tender heart would not to forgiveness, say goodbye Yet, at every call, dad’s words would force him into a cry                  Oh, go away yesterday! Feeling unloved and forsaken; with no fatherly guide He’d left home a young teen, to take destiny in his stride And in never being dependent on another, take pride                  Oh, go away yesterday! Grief-stricken and now grey, dad had come to bond anew Pondering, “will I be received or paid my neglectful due”? Breathless, son had said to self, before “dad, I love you”                  “Oh, go away yesterday!” 5/11/18 Entry for Rhyme and Refrain Contest. Sponsor: Broken Wings. Theme – Oh, go away yesterday. Keywords required: Emotions, breathless, forsaken, destiny

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Date: 6/2/2018 6:40:00 PM
Wow, lots of emotion here. Well done, Sandison. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/8/2018 5:14:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Line. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Appreciated. Cheers, Sandison.
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Date: 6/8/2018 5:06:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Line. I really appreciate your visit. Cheers, Sandison
Date: 5/19/2018 8:20:00 AM
Sandison, it's never too late, enjoyed your write.
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Date: 5/20/2018 8:33:00 AM
Very true James, never too late. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by. Cheers, Sandison
Date: 5/15/2018 2:46:00 PM
Sandison, congratulations on your win in my contest, well done ~
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Date: 5/17/2018 5:53:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wings. I am happy you found my piece worthy. Also, I will like to say I love your pseudonym and hope the "wings" heal quickly to enable you fly higher. Cheers, Sandison
Date: 5/14/2018 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. So sad but so real. Well done.
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Date: 5/17/2018 6:00:00 AM
Thank you Susan for stopping by and reading. Very real issue, especially with the fast paced life of today's working parents. Cheers, Sandison

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