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Oh For Some Zzzz

I slept in our bed sound asleep Under the covers i felt a hand creep It was my American dove Who had given me a shove For my snoring had left her counting sheep http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/humour-2.php

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Date: 9/14/2010 2:53:00 AM
hehe, I could just see the confusion on your face when you felt that shove :) enjoyed your limerick James.. Hope your Tuesday is a happy one :) Wilma
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Date: 3/16/2010 3:42:00 AM
ZZZZZSnore...Keep the creative pen flowing. Great write...LOL ....Sara
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Date: 3/15/2010 9:31:00 PM
This poem is very neatly written, it brought a smile to my face, how many mornings I have felt the pain of being woke, good job!~
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Date: 3/12/2010 9:44:00 PM
this one even better, James. I hate when MY hubbie snores! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/12/2010 6:05:00 PM
Very funny James...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 3/12/2010 3:06:00 PM
Sweet and cute .. looking at your title I could not help but think of a poem by Daniel Corcoran today entitled Asleep.. I won't spoil it for u James.. go and take a look... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/12/2010 2:18:00 PM
Very amusing and cute! and thank you kind Sir for your comment, love Simone
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Date: 3/12/2010 1:44:00 PM
You snore, James? Well, that changes everything! Just kidding. Got a great laugh from this one. I wonder how many sheep had to jump over the fence before the dove fell asleep. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/12/2010 1:43:00 PM
funny--("v")
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