James Fraser Poet Limerick

Oh For Some Zzzz

I slept in our bed sound asleep
Under the covers i felt a hand creep
    It was my American dove
    Who had given me a shove
For my snoring had left her counting sheep





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Wilma Neels September 14, 2010 at 2:53 AM hehe, I could just see the confusion on your face when you felt that shove :) enjoyed your limerick James.. Hope your Tuesday is a happy one :) Wilma

Sara Kendrick March 16, 2010 at 3:42 AM ZZZZZSnore...Keep the creative pen flowing. Great write...LOL ....Sara

Heather Hill March 15, 2010 at 9:31 PM This poem is very neatly written, it brought a smile to my face, how many mornings I have felt the pain of being woke, good job!~

Andrea Dietrich March 12, 2010 at 9:44 PM this one even better, James. I hate when MY hubbie snores! LUv, Andrea

Marty Owens March 12, 2010 at 6:05 PM Very funny James...enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 12, 2010 at 3:06 PM Sweet and cute .. looking at your title I could not help but think of a poem by Daniel Corcoran today entitled Asleep.. I won't spoil it for u James.. go and take a look... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Simone Segal March 12, 2010 at 2:18 PM Very amusing and cute! and thank you kind Sir for your comment, love Simone

Carolyn Devonshire March 12, 2010 at 1:44 PM You snore, James? Well, that changes everything! Just kidding. Got a great laugh from this one. I wonder how many sheep had to jump over the fence before the dove fell asleep. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse March 12, 2010 at 1:43 PM funny--("v")