Oh Fish

If God is such a gracious giver
This water was boiling oil I wish,
so straight from the running river
...I'd have instant deep fried fish.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Coulstock Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 5:52 PM
Hi Aseem .As well as writing good poetry I see you have a sense of humour as well.This is fun,I like it.It's good to laugh.Thank you.Love June(Sylvia)
Mehta Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 9:40 AM
Nice creative write on fish, Aseem
Mac Donald Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 9:08 AM
I suppose you'd need to see what you'd given? The fish sound like a good starter.:) Fun piece, Aseem. Mikki
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