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Oh Fish

If God is such a gracious giver This water was boiling oil I wish, so straight from the running river ...I'd have instant deep fried fish.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/14/2010 5:52:00 PM
Hi Aseem .As well as writing good poetry I see you have a sense of humour as well.This is fun,I like it.It's good to laugh.Thank you.Love June(Sylvia)
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Date: 12/12/2010 9:40:00 AM
Nice creative write on fish, Aseem
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Date: 12/12/2010 9:08:00 AM
I suppose you'd need to see what you'd given? The fish sound like a good starter.:) Fun piece, Aseem. Mikki
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