Oh Fiddle Faddle - Nursery Rhyme

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What a double muddle. The dog fell in a mud puddle. He jumped in the pool, Which was against the rule. They called out to him. "You forgot to learn to swim" Oh fiddle faddle. "Its ok" he said, "I can dog paddle".

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Silent One

Date: 12/26/2023 6:32:00 AM

This was lovely..Congratulations on your placement

Valsa George

Date: 12/25/2023 8:39:00 PM

Such a cute poem. I love it so much. Succinct and adorable. You have done a clever job. The very image conveys so much. Congratulations on your first place win. Wish you a Merry Christmas dear SV.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/25/2023 8:54:00 PM

Ditto my darling Valsa. I will watch from afar as you sail back up the contest charts. .. Wen

Eve Roper

Date: 12/24/2023 10:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/25/2023 2:37:00 PM

Thank you dear Eve. Merry Christmas to you.

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/8/2023 12:55:00 PM

SV, what a moving, humorous, and expressive work brimming with nuanced creativity; I'm certain it touches the children's hearts and minds too deeply! You possess a linguistic ability that is simultaneously tender and profound.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/8/2023 1:01:00 PM

Its a simple little rhyme, but these days children grow up so quickly, with five year olds using computers. So Nursery rhymes really have to be aimed at the very young, like about 3 year olds. (older kids wont be interested.) So the KIS rule must apply. Keep It Simple ! Thanks for your lovely comment my friend.