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Oh, Death Is Unforgiving

  
"Shadows of yesteryears rise up again on All Hallows Eve, to roam the streets and parks, to whisper in the trees." Quote by _Constance
In a church cemetery rest the dead until Halloween night, when coffins open and they tread at midnight. Among the living they look so creepy but some are still weepy, full of gloom and sad words unsaid gone is inner light. Ghoulish and eerie they walk with the living oh, death is unforgiving, to meet one fills you with dread and they give a fright. Terrifying and frightening scary shadows walking streets and meadows, stumbling through a flowerbed silhouettes not right. In darkness under the moon they stroll searching for their lost soul, then, with descending moon they have fled before the sun is bright. __________________________ October 31, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/Oh, Death is Unforgiving Copyright Protected, ID 10-1498-081-31 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France With ten required words Rhyming verified on RhymeZone Written for the Premiere contest, Halloween Poetry sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 11/30/2022 First Place
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Alex Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 5:28 AM
"In darkness under the moon they stroll searching for their lost soul" - Indeed, such beautiful writing. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 2:31 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment, and congratulations, blessings
George Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 8:18 PM
Congratulations Constance on your well deserved first place win in Emile's contest!
La France Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 4:03 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the visit and the congratulations, blessings
Hankins Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations, Constance, on this well-deserved place in Emile's contest. Beautifully-written!
La France Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 4:04 AM
Milt, thank you so much for the comment, congratulations and compliment, blessings
Sands Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations for your great win :)
La France Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 4:05 AM
Heidi, thank you so much for the visit and congratulations, blessings
Fowler Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 10:32 AM
What a great poem! Congratulations on your win Constance! :)
La France Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 4:05 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Flood Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 10:30 AM
Congratulations on your worthy top spot in Emile’s contest, Constance. Enjoyed muchly. Terry
La France Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 4:06 AM
Terry, thank you so much for the congratulations, and compliment, blessings
Pinet Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your eerie poem "Oh, Death is Unforgiving", has placed "First" in my contest. This contest was done to have some Halloween fun and your poem stood out above all of them with its emotional impact. Very well done my friend.
La France Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 4:07 AM
Emile, thank you so much for the inspiration, contest, and my wonderful placement, and for the comment, compliment and congratulations, appreciate, blessings
Volumes Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on a very well deserved win with this excellent poem
La France Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 4:08 AM
Wendy, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings
La France Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 6:37 AM
This poem was so fun to write and I love how it turned out, hope Emile likes it.
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