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Oh Dear Rose

Oh dear Rose, you prickle me That if I do so much but breathe I will be full of scars and pain Though I love to see your beauty close I cannot out of vain Oh dear Rose, you wounded me And even if this pulse do beat with you I cannot touch but by just look The stronger I want this feeling to go The longer my pain to heal took Oh dear Rose, you make me weep You go in cadence with the meadow That I want so much to give caress Though your arms, so near to grasp I do not but watch you less Oh dear Rose, you give me grief I am longing for you in ages But you come and hurt me again This heart, this love may not be strong But yet I cannot pull away then Oh dear Rose, my dearest Rose, you'd make me die That you memory stays too long enough for mine And I cannot contain what is inside I try to run away from your face But then I get scared without you and your embrace But dear Rose - don't make me forget That there is a sun though she hides That there is life though I died That there will be more happiness than sorrow And a rainbow will shine on the bright tomorrow ========================================== Flowers Contest 10th Place Written by: Jan Camille Tongco P.s. Although I know I am going against the no-rhyme, free verse only rule, I still would like to try. Hope this takes the sting of winter away. Thanks

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Date: 2/22/2011 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations Jan on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Flowers". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You earned it with this great write.
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Date: 2/5/2011 12:39:00 PM
Hi Jan - Congratulations on your deserved WIN in Francine's "Flower" contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/1/2011 6:09:00 AM
Congrats Jan on your wonderful win in the Flowers contest with this impressive write and exciting entry .. enjoy sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/31/2011 11:25:00 PM
Sometimes it is hard not to rhyme when the words want to fall that way. Congratulations Jan. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:53:00 PM
WEll, you got on the top ten and I have enjoyed every single poem I just read on the list. Congratulations, keep up your great poetry. luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:40:00 PM
Ms. Roberts, thank you so much for the recognition. Really glad to have a chance to be part of your contest. Thanks again ^_^
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Jan
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:36:00 PM
Indeed, your poem takes away the sting of winter, Jan. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:25:00 PM
it would have done better if you had done a free verse but I'll still give it a 10th place because its wonderful. I normally do not even consider poetry that doesn't fit my restrictions, so you won't be forgiven so easily next time.
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