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Robert J. Lindley, 10-12-2017
Rhyme, (Subject - Poets, Poetry and Life)

Note-- I did spend much, much longer on this one that any other poem previously written in the last 6 months. Hope the reader may enjoy the read and the thoughts on Life, Love, Poetry, Imagination, Messages and Black Ink staining previously clean white pages..

Oft Bold The Thoughts, When Pen Strikes Paper Oft bold the thoughts, when pen strikes paper even should ones shovel meet dark coals. Shrouds removed, to smell new rising vapors or challenge poets tired and resting souls! Sought, shimmering pools of bright, clear waters even should bare feet stay perfectly dry. Honing in on what truly, truly matters with deep imagination, oft we learn to fly! With deft strokes, ink oft treasures display even should, the hiding muse wail. With emotions risen, word-spouts soon spray darkest secrets others fear, fear to tell! Oft bold the thoughts, when pen strikes paper even should ones shovel meet dark coals. Shrouds removed, to smell new rising vapors or to challenge poets tired and resting souls! Gold and white marble in great palaces rise even should the tale turn sad and tragic. With one stroke, ink opens up radiant skies and therein lies Art, poetry's golden magic! From grim and gray, ink oozes sweeter romance even should the poet decide one dies. What is life, if nothing was ever left to chance the one taken, when gazing into her eyes! Oft bold the thoughts, when pen strikes paper even should ones shovel meet dark coals. Shrouds removed, to smell new rising vapors or challenge lost poets, tired and resting souls! Waiting for beauty as in, "Venice, the Bridge of Sighs" even should sought after results not compare. Pen lingers, waiting for beauty of, rainbow skies or soul's desirous depths only true love can bear! With each new stroke, paper relishes that arrival even should, the splash reveal darker stains. For creativity is the rich goal not mere survival and the feeling that lasting success attains! Oft bold the thoughts, when pen strikes paper even should ones shovel meet dark coals. Shrouds removed, to smell new rising vapors or challenge poets tired and resting souls! As ink paints and starry eyed love takes hold even should one decide tis failure, all is lost. A great tragedy is born and thus many have sold for gold, tho' poet's heart pays weeping cost! On to the next stanza, pen cries to be set free even should, disaster strike the reluctant poet. Another ship waits for its long trip to black-ink seas in heart of hearts, poetry lives, if we but grow it! Robert J. Lindley, 10-12-2017 Rhyme, (Subject - Poets, Poetry and Life) Note-- I did spend much, much longer on this one that any other poem previously written in the last 6 months. Hope the reader may enjoy the read and the thoughts on Life, Love, Poetry, Imagination, Messages and Black Ink staining previously clean white pages..

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Date: 10/31/2017 9:17:00 AM
I most fervently hope that the good Lord sees fit to ensure that you remain with us for a good deal longer more, Robert...you truly are an institution -- here on the great "Soup"! My very warmest regards and best wishes as always. Your friend. :) john P.s As this lovely ensemble so ably demonstrates...some of your best work could well be yet to come!
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Date: 10/14/2017 9:34:00 AM
I agree with all of the talented poetesses/poets ... this is a labor of love written in scarlet ink of creative strawberry sweat juices, Robert. It is such a beautiful, poetically breathtaking swan flight ... the repeated title refrain stanza is soooo good. It's cerebral yum-yum. You are a most gifted poet ... so when the spirit moves the muse, take all the time you need. Supremely elegant poem, brother. Love and more love always.
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Date: 10/14/2017 10:11:00 AM
Thank you much my friend. Your kindness and support me a lot to this old and often very tired poet. Sadly,I feel that my remaining time left on this wobbling, old blue marble is in the short rows, but we must carry on and we must write!
Date: 10/13/2017 3:22:00 PM
Robert, I've found that the poems you take the longest one, either end up being the best things you've ever done.. or they become your worst enemies, because you feel like you just can't get them right. This one is absolutely fantastic! A lingering pen is haunting indeed, but I think in your case the lingering brought on a masterpiece :) Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 10/14/2017 10:09:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I am humbled by your reply my friend. Such is a great honor for me, coming from such a talented poet! And you also know that lingering pen feeling!!
Date: 10/13/2017 8:59:00 AM
Good morning Robert... I enjoyed reading your Art... Have a wonderful day
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Date: 10/14/2017 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Arturo. I appreciate your kind comments and fine poetic talents as well..
Date: 10/13/2017 1:59:00 AM
Robert my friend, under our pens whole worlds emerge, live and submerge again, like Atlantis, we paint and create. Don't stop writing ever, because this is beautiful.
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Date: 10/14/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Darren. So true, poets create and recreate, over and over again- such beautiful verses and heartfelt thoughts. They gift such to the world regardless of whether it appreciates or even notices their dedicated writing efforts!
Date: 10/12/2017 12:20:00 PM
Gorgeous penning, deep and rich, love your rhythm and rhyme. Wonderful piece Robert :) xomo!
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Date: 10/14/2017 10:00:00 AM
Than you Maureen.. This one struck me as it must be written. Problem was , when to stop writing--since poetry has such immense depth, beauty and epic history.

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