Officer and a Gentleman

Not winter blowing cold, not the rough kind
His Air Force topcoat bearing a promise;
Like a gift draped on my shoulders he’ll miss
That from anticipated distance, we find,
One dream to quell a thirsting quite refined
With gentle rush to hold, to care, and kiss.
Yet love must express, his will, to say this,
“How treasured you are and always enshrined.
So come, dear one, let’s trail the endless sand
As I go to war caressed by nights hued;
Yonder the waiting grass, near warm trees’ nest
Our vows anchored on my lifetime’s command...
Return I will, a faithful groom renewed,
Yes, only then shall we feel wholly blest!”


4/24/2016
Broken Wing's Loyalty Contest
*Remembrances of my Dad's Sense
of Devotion for Mom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 1:12 AM
NETTE, CONGRATS on your Loyalty win. SKAT
Devnath  Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Scars Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Nette, wow a perfect entry for the contest, yes this is definitely about pure loyalty..best wishes for the contest lady :)-luloo
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 7:36 AM
- A small part of life ...... lovely written, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Sun :)
Vaso Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 12:42 AM
The title is just a title, until I read the poem, then the words both title and poem filled my heart! Beautiful!
Dunn Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 9:57 PM
Dear Nette This is story that takes me back years, and years ago, a timeless romantic story of loves devotion against the odds, great job good luck in the contest my dear, and yes I'm fine, just a little nervous about the up coming surgery, but I'm holding it together, thanks for the asking, cheri d.
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 8:00 PM
how sweet this is. So your dad was an officer? I hope he came back and that they lived a long happy life together, nette. Please have you read your soupmails. I do hope so.
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