Off White

We know it's not true 'Cause white's dirty anyway! What is purity?

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Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/1/2010 5:42:00 AM

Congrates on having your poem featured this week A thought provoking Senryu nicely done Abe love Jayne

Skat A

Date: 9/29/2010 9:01:00 AM

HI, ABE, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2010 5:47:00 PM

lol nice one Abe, congrats on having your poem featured on the soup, it was a pleasure reading today...P.D.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 6:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Abe. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/26/2010 3:18:00 PM

Congrats Abe on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a nice one to share with us all today with luv..hope u are well and will return soon...luv... missing u...

James Fraser

Date: 9/11/2009 9:04:00 AM

True words by Raul, nothing white exists. Butt this fine Senyru doe's and that's what is important>>James

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/21/2008 6:04:00 PM

True white doesn't exist, this is true, the title coincides with the context very well, Excellent sentry...Raul

Anna Kittrell

Date: 12/17/2008 10:33:00 AM

Wow. I should use more bleach! I like this, tell me what its' about.