Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Off To the Zoo

Quote By Poet "A zoo trip can put a zip in your walk and zeal for being outside with the animals."

Off to the zoo we all went with no clue,
          Sally ~ Zack filled with pep.
      The big striped zebra did not moo
                     zeal in his step.


Walking the long winding zig-zag walkway,
          we wanted a cold drink.
      What a very hot summer's day,
                    we all wore pink.


The fun day and animals had ended,
          now off to home with zip.
      Dinner will be hot and splendid,
                   zucchini ~ dip.

Date Written: 12/24/2022

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HowManySyllables and RhymeZone
Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing Poetry Contest                                 Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Sam Kauffman January 24, 2023 at 12:21 PM Paula, a poem filled with the delight of a day at the zoo and a delicious zucchini and dip for dinner. This would be a wonderful children's book filled with the enthusiasm of a child's heart. Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend. Am busy replacing five lost rose bushes. Fun to see the new varieties coming in! Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2023 at 12:32 PM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my crazy Zoo write. Yes, it would make a wonderful children's book. Sounds like you are very busy with your flowers. I love roses. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away or planting away..................

Constance La France January 24, 2023 at 7:41 AM Paula, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing, I love your delightful poem, and quote, well done, Constance Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2023 at 12:28 PM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your "Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing Poetry Contest." Thank You, for the placement and for having this contest. Glad you like my Z'ssss write. It was fun to write. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..................

Delice Arleen Skelly January 20, 2023 at 2:56 AM Fun fantasy poem, Zucchini dip sounds good..Delice Paula Goldsmith January 20, 2023 at 7:15 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. It is great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun zoo write. Have a wonderful/blessed day.............

Len Gasun January 19, 2023 at 3:22 PM Coming back to greet you a Big Congrats on your well-deserved first win my dear friend Paula! Congratulations on your wonderful win and this excellent write! So delighted to read it once again. Thank you. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs Paula Goldsmith January 20, 2023 at 7:14 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. It is great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing again. Glad you enjoyed my zoo write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a wonderful/blessed day.............

Eve Roper January 19, 2023 at 10:40 AM Very good and creative verse, Paula. Congratulations on your 1st place win in Constance’s contest. Hugs blessings, Eve Paula Goldsmith January 19, 2023 at 12:15 PM Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my creative/fun day at the zoo write. Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Sotto Poet January 18, 2023 at 7:08 AM Back with many congratulations on your contest win Paula, it's well deserved with this stunning poetry. Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 10:36 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun zoo trip/write. Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Sara Kendrick January 18, 2023 at 3:43 AM Creative way to go with this challenge. Congratulations on your winner. Sara. Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 10:35 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you like my fun/creative zoo trip/write. Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Christuraj Alex January 17, 2023 at 11:39 PM Interesting writing Off To The Zoo. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 10:34 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you like my fun zoo write. Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Unseeking Seeker January 17, 2023 at 7:26 PM What a delightful write, Paula :) warmest congratulations on your win Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 10:24 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you like this fun write. Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Valsa George January 17, 2023 at 5:59 PM A hilarious and fun filled ride to the zoo and back home. Congratulations Paula on your first place win. Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 10:26 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Yes, it was a fun car ride and day at the zoo. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2023 at 5:46 PM A fun ending…sounds delicious! Congratulations, Paula! Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 10:23 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Doesn't everyone have zucchini ~ dip for dinner??? Hahaha...Have a wonderful/blessed day............

William Kelii Kekaula January 17, 2023 at 10:31 AM Humorously designed, Paula, like the zebra-moo connection. My compliments and my blessings on your well accomplished work. Aloha William Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 10:20 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like this funny Rhyme write. The big striped zebra did not moo on the day we were there. They do moo don't they?? Hahaha........... Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Len Gasun December 26, 2022 at 11:06 PM I enjoyed this brilliant and creative write of yours my dear friend. The form of rhyme looks so special and unique. So delightful to read. I love it. Good luck in the contest my dear friend, although it's already a winner in my book. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs Paula Goldsmith December 27, 2022 at 10:06 AM Thanks for writing and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my zoo trip. It was fun to write. Have A Very Happy/Blessed New Year 2023 with Hugs...............

Sotto Poet December 25, 2022 at 10:14 AM Paula, this is just the cutest thing ever. A pleasure both to read and to live through again! I hope you and your family have a wonderful holiday season. Paula Goldsmith December 25, 2022 at 10:32 AM Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun zoo trip. Kids/adults like to see the animals even on a hot day. Merry Christmas..................

Gershon Wolf December 24, 2022 at 9:30 PM So utterly sweet, Paula. A delight to read and re-experience! ... Merry Christmas to you, Gershon Paula Goldsmith December 25, 2022 at 10:30 AM Thanks for writing. Glad you like my fun zoo trip writing. Merry Christmas..................

Panagiota Romios December 24, 2022 at 9:39 AM Delightfully Clever, Paula. Best wishes, Pangie xoxo Paula Goldsmith December 24, 2022 at 10:26 AM Thanks for writing. Glad you like my "Off To The Zoo" trip/writing. Merry Christmas..................