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OF WEIGHTED CROWN whose thorns? you think you know. c r o w n e d with heavy g o l d of s i n — layer upon layer, an i m m o v a b l e feast. the k e g of power, one thinks he has. king of t e r r o r, troubled in burdensome brow. the d a n c e of the threatening l y n x , with eyes of o p a l fire, free a kingdom of his earthly voice. Salome’s unabandoned rhythm chops off Herod’s head. The king’s unholy wife and child are his f e t t e r s for life...for death. the Savior preaches and heals as the Baptist’s head is plated, presented and celebrated for a brief season. 4/2/2018 It’s A Shorty Contest/Sponsor: Deborah Beachboard

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Date: 4/2/2018 1:00:00 PM
There is only one who will wear the crown in the next life.Interesting verse Kim. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2018 1:39:00 PM
Thanks, Tom! For sure...the real crown on the King of glory!

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