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Of Two Minds

You are the light Pollution Of my life You are sound Intrusion 13/06/18

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Susan Gentry

Date: 6/21/2018 5:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this creative poem!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/22/2018 8:02:00 AM

Thank you Susan! :) xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/19/2018 8:42:00 PM

Revisiting this worthy winner, I realize that -- flattery being the sincerest form of fawning, obsequious bleah-bleah -- I just about lifted your format right off the page in my poem, "A pill is," written two days later (June 15). Were I a doctor, you could sue me for malpractice! :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/19/2018 9:19:00 PM

Oh I stake no claims! Or remember any names. ;) mo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2018 3:35:00 PM

very interesting how you contrasted the two columns! Congrats for your win.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/19/2018 9:22:00 PM

You know, the night and day day to day ;) thank you! xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2018 12:25:00 PM

- I visit your poem Maureen, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/17/2018 12:50:00 PM

Thank you, your Sunshine hugs the best :)) xomo!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/17/2018 11:37:00 AM

Back with congratulations Maureen. Tom.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/17/2018 12:50:00 PM

Thank you Tom :) xomo

James Swartz

Date: 6/17/2018 7:40:00 AM

Great stuff Maureen! We can follow your words and know what you mean in your short and sweet thoughts. That is true creativity.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/17/2018 9:54:00 AM

Thank you James! Can't always read two sides of a coin at once, without spinning ;) xomo!

Roy Pett

Date: 6/17/2018 7:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Maureen, very clever you get so much meaning out of so few words, absolutely brilliant. :))

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/17/2018 9:52:00 AM

I am a mo of few words ;) Thank you so much Roy! Beaming from the "B" word <3

Silent One

Date: 6/17/2018 7:16:00 AM

Very deep Mo.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/17/2018 9:49:00 AM

Thrilled! Thank you Silent One. I nearly pulled it out of the race several times not sure I was answering the spirit of your contest prompt, then it was too late. I feel better now ;) xomo!

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/17/2018 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Maureen! :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/17/2018 9:50:00 AM

Thank you Heidi :) xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2018 10:20:00 PM

Fascinatin' Fiction! Symmetrical Synchrony ! (Whatever that means) and Vintage McGreavy Mintage ! all rolled into one 'elluva creation … Had to 'tie me Wallaby down' after I read this one. (LOL) ~ Gershon

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/15/2018 7:01:00 AM

You're brightening my day Gershon, thank you for your warmth and sunshine my friend! xomo

Mike Hauser

Date: 6/14/2018 10:20:00 AM

Love it

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/14/2018 10:33:00 AM

Thank ya :) xomo!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/14/2018 9:54:00 AM

Ah, it s a veey interesting write, I really like the double meaning in it

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/14/2018 10:17:00 AM

Thank you Faraz :) xomo

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/14/2018 3:42:00 AM

You must be the Sun in order to receive the polluted light without becoming impure...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/17/2018 1:27:00 AM

You want deep... here we go... you need more than a cup of coffee...The heart is a deep abyss, at the bottom of which you will always find forgiveness...Cheers...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/14/2018 7:19:00 AM

That is deep! My coffee not deep enough this morning ;p awesome! xomo :))