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Of Two Minds

You are the light

                                                           Pollution
                     Of my life


                     You are sound

                                                           Intrusion







13/06/18

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Susan Gentry

June 21, 2018 at 5:33 PM

Congratulations on your win with this creative poem!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 22, 2018 at 8:02 AM

Thank you Susan! :) xomo

Gershon Wolf

June 19, 2018 at 8:42 PM

Revisiting this worthy winner, I realize that -- flattery being the sincerest form of fawning, obsequious bleah-bleah -- I just about lifted your format right off the page in my poem, "A pill is," written two days later (June 15). Were I a doctor, you could sue me for malpractice! :) gw

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 19, 2018 at 9:19 PM

Oh I stake no claims! Or remember any names. ;) mo

Andrea Dietrich

June 19, 2018 at 3:35 PM

very interesting how you contrasted the two columns! Congrats for your win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 19, 2018 at 9:22 PM

You know, the night and day day to day ;) thank you! xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 17, 2018 at 12:25 PM

- I visit your poem Maureen, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 17, 2018 at 12:50 PM

Thank you, your Sunshine hugs the best :)) xomo!

Tom Cunningham

June 17, 2018 at 11:37 AM

Back with congratulations Maureen. Tom.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 17, 2018 at 12:50 PM

Thank you Tom :) xomo

James Swartz

June 17, 2018 at 7:40 AM

Great stuff Maureen! We can follow your words and know what you mean in your short and sweet thoughts. That is true creativity.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 17, 2018 at 9:54 AM

Thank you James! Can't always read two sides of a coin at once, without spinning ;) xomo!

Roy Pett

June 17, 2018 at 7:31 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Maureen, very clever you get so much meaning out of so few words, absolutely brilliant. :))

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 17, 2018 at 9:52 AM

I am a mo of few words ;) Thank you so much Roy! Beaming from the "B" word <3

Silent One

June 17, 2018 at 7:16 AM

Very deep Mo.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 17, 2018 at 9:49 AM

Thrilled! Thank you Silent One. I nearly pulled it out of the race several times not sure I was answering the spirit of your contest prompt, then it was too late. I feel better now ;) xomo!

Heidi Sands

June 17, 2018 at 7:04 AM

Congratulations for your win Maureen! :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 17, 2018 at 9:50 AM

Thank you Heidi :) xomo

Gershon Wolf

June 14, 2018 at 10:20 PM

Fascinatin' Fiction! Symmetrical Synchrony ! (Whatever that means) and Vintage McGreavy Mintage ! all rolled into one 'elluva creation … Had to 'tie me Wallaby down' after I read this one. (LOL) ~ Gershon

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 15, 2018 at 7:01 AM

You're brightening my day Gershon, thank you for your warmth and sunshine my friend! xomo

Mike Hauser

June 14, 2018 at 10:20 AM

Love it

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 14, 2018 at 10:33 AM

Thank ya :) xomo!

Faraz Ajmal

June 14, 2018 at 9:54 AM

Ah, it s a veey interesting write, I really like the double meaning in it

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 14, 2018 at 10:17 AM

Thank you Faraz :) xomo

Pashang Salehi

June 14, 2018 at 3:42 AM

You must be the Sun in order to receive the polluted light without becoming impure...

Pashang Salehi

June 17, 2018 at 1:27 AM

You want deep... here we go... you need more than a cup of coffee...The heart is a deep abyss, at the bottom of which you will always find forgiveness...Cheers...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 14, 2018 at 7:19 AM

That is deep! My coffee not deep enough this morning ;p awesome! xomo :))