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Our future he impacts Social issues he just stacks He gives educators the axe Keeps piling the load on our backs His stance on illegal immigrants lacks He took a loose stance on tax Mud slung, he seldom retracts From his vantage point he acts Lives in a mansion while we live in shacks Lots of promises, few facts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/8/2010 2:00:00 PM
Congrats, Robb. Excellent. write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:30:00 PM
great monorhyme, congrats on your win Robb
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Date: 11/7/2010 5:54:00 PM
Congtratulations, Robb! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Robb in Carolyn's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:26:00 PM
heehee cool-congrats on your win here. Love the poem Robb
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-earned win in the Limerick Contest, Robb! Always, Audrey
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Date: 11/7/2010 1:00:00 PM
Robb...Many congrats on winning in contest with this nice piece. Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/7/2010 11:55:00 AM
Love the line " While we live in shacks!" True. Congratulations on your poem's honor, Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/7/2010 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Robb
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Date: 11/7/2010 5:32:00 AM
There's a lot of truth in this monorhyme, Robb. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/30/2010 6:32:00 AM
Perfect Robb.. great lines of truth .. an awesome piece.. if u enter in the contest..good luck my friend.. this is quite powerful and poignant..have a Happy Halloween weekend with luv..
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Date: 10/29/2010 11:08:00 AM
So true! "Lots of promises, few facts" sums it up so well. And the monorhyme is awesome, Robb! Great entry for the election humor contest. Good luck. Diane
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