Of Rhythm

-Of Rhythm-

Musing the amusing truth in rhythm of verse,
In life there’s one focal of all efforts: success.
Plainly remarkable stems of rhythm grow;
Mesmerizing and clasping and grasping wonders.
There are many worthwhile wonders buried beneath.
The topsoil, the cloud due dig deep, down miles and wide;
For lot’s hidden beyond men on the horizon.
Musing amusingly, rhythm in silhouette:
When first creations know not what’s real and what’s odd.
The rhythm- messages the night believes are vague,
While the day strives, trips, slips and sleeps off in between.
No man blames the sky for descending darkness.
It seeks none from men, not even of livelihood.
For ascending light in the days, men toil through too.
Amazing rhythms are gifts from Mother Nature.
The little born receives, foretells the more unborn,
In the kingdom of the sky, the land and the sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/1/2014 9:58:00 AM
Hello Abdulfayeez, pleased to read the resultant winner you have created all the best Joe..'
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/5/2014 6:29:00 PM
just noticing the name you've created. but i like it when i'm being called my real name, Abdulhafeez. hope you undestand. thanks again Joe.
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/5/2014 1:25:00 AM
Thanks Joe for your kind drop here.
Date: 12/28/2013 6:48:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win,Abdulhafeez
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/5/2014 1:24:00 AM
Thanks Dr Ram.
Date: 12/27/2013 1:45:00 AM
hello Abdulhafeez, .. CONGRATULATIONS -thank you for supporting my contest. Wishing you the best when it comes to Health and Happiness, this coming New Year! xox..Linda
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 1/5/2014 1:22:00 AM
I wish you the same here. Thanks my mistress across the ocean.
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