Of Reeds and Flowered Dreams

For some of us, the dream of love
is tender as a seed
which, sown in fertile hopeful minds,
grows common as a reed.

A stalwart grass, with no rare scent;
no fancy blooms to see;
no passion’s rose, it merely stands
with nothing grand to be.

It shelters me, this simple reed
that slightly bends in breeze.
But winds of lust I do not feel,
to bring me to my knees.

And taste of bliss I do not know;
I dream the fantasy,
for fertile minds can still create
a rose through poetry.

Strand Completely New(6),Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 3:48 PM
"for fertile minds can still create a rose through poetry" - beautiful ending line; makes it a masterpiece, my friend.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 6:46 PM
I love your skillfulness in rhyming, Andrea, an admirable composition truly, my compliments in your fine TOP win at 1st Place -- Aloha~@William
Kauffman Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 12:00 PM
Andrea, this is so lovely. Uniquely creative juxtaposition of roses and reeds - I think of cattails. Congratulations on your top win! Sending you blessings.
Johnson Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:47 AM
Congrats, my friend. I love it. Blessings.
Watt Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations on a first place win with your lovely poem, Andrea
Brul Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 2:47 AM
Wow, your last stanza took my breath away: "And taste of bliss I do not know; I dream the fantasy, for fertile minds can still create a rose through poetry." Beautiful !!!Congratulations for a TOP WIN!! A FAVE!!
Watt Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 11:56 PM
I love the roses you create through poetry, Andrea, here and elsewhere. Your mind is as fertile as they come. Thank you for the many bouquets you grace us with ~ John
Bayles Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Very nice, Andrea.
Pandit Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Dream of love tender as a seed--lovely write Andrea. The last line resonates.
Cunningham Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 5:11 PM
Love the flow of this one Andrea Tom
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