Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Lyric

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Of One Sweet Kiss- Anacreontic Verse

OF ONE SWEET KISS
 ~~anacreontic verse~~

     As  yawning  sun
   shall end the day
     and stars at night
   flutter betray,
     my heart besets
   the velvet sight
     and wafting breeze-
   no solace brings.
     I wander slow
   walking on air,
     pictures within
   whisper confuse
     yet, love I dare
   feather breath warmth,
     lit the magic
   'til angels rose
     to pluck dire strings
   so bards may sing
     my lovers name.
   By candy flame
     of deep despair,
   seeking spirit
     moans in silence.
   Thirsty thoughts
     in depth of eve
   spell longing weep,
     my lone heart tears
   of waiting song,
     of one sweet kiss. . .
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10:01 am, October 28, 2015


***dedicated to my HUGE ONE~~~ James Fraser

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Line Gauthier January 25, 2021 at 6:03 PM Beautiful, Olive ~ it's lovely to find this published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~

Jeannie Cronin November 21, 2015 at 3:36 PM Beautiful! Congrats on your first place win!

Teddy Kimathi November 21, 2015 at 4:18 AM Greetings Olivia! Congrats on your #1 placement in the contest! ;-)

Kim Merryman November 20, 2015 at 8:22 PM A beautiful write, Olive! Congrats on your well-deserved 1st place win! Love, KIm

Sara Kendrick November 20, 2015 at 2:53 PM Ahh!! Love the picture..Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Anisha Dutta November 19, 2015 at 8:02 PM Congratulation Olive to be at top twice a day. Really you are a great poet. Anisha D

Jan Allison November 19, 2015 at 3:02 PM A wonderful dedication to your lovely James - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos November 19, 2015 at 10:15 AM Oh, this is so beautiful! Congratulations, Olive on your top of the tree win! Just so lovely with wonderful, capitvating imagery! Pandita

Sandra Haight November 19, 2015 at 8:56 AM Olive, congratulations on your top of the podium win! Such a beautiful song of love! Hugs, Sandra

Ralph Sergi November 19, 2015 at 6:59 AM Hi Olive: A beautiful ode on One Sweet Kiss Congratulations!

James Inman November 19, 2015 at 6:34 AM Again, beautiful Olive.

Balveen Cheema November 19, 2015 at 6:29 AM Congrats in your super win Olive!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 19, 2015 at 4:37 AM Ah Olive what a romantic write.. hez so fortunate.. Congrats on top podium!

Nette Onclaud November 19, 2015 at 2:10 AM ohh what a kiss, eloi.. super congrats!..huggs

Michael Tor November 18, 2015 at 11:21 PM Exceptional win Olive!!! Congratulations!!I'm sure James would love this. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 6, 2016 at 6:44 AM Thanks much Michael.. =`) I appreciate you liking this.. =`)

Lin Lane November 18, 2015 at 9:07 PM way to go, Olive. Congratulations. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 24, 2015 at 6:13 AM thanks Lin.. :)

Skat A November 18, 2015 at 8:06 PM Hi, Olive, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT** Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 23, 2015 at 9:47 PM Thanks much Skat.. =`)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 18, 2015 at 7:22 PM Congratulations in the placement of the contest. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 20, 2015 at 8:45 PM thanks much NAyda.. =`)

Edward Ebbs November 18, 2015 at 6:13 PM I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 20, 2015 at 8:42 PM Thank you Edward for seeing my poem worthy to be at the top.. =`)

Debbie Guzzi November 3, 2015 at 6:57 PM ;) ahhh he is a big man aye? LOL good writing dear Light & Love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 19, 2015 at 6:10 AM Yes Debbie he is.. =`) thanks much!!=`) hugs@

Mark Woods November 3, 2015 at 11:42 AM This poem is divine, a beautiful write and so romantic. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 19, 2015 at 2:37 AM MArk, I thank you for your encouraging comment.. =`) Its a mega booster.. =`)

James Inman November 3, 2015 at 8:46 AM Aaahhhh, you make me sigh Olive. I agree with the comment you left on my poem, they seem to be mostly romantic. I think the form works well for that, almost like whispering sweet nothings into someones ear. Beautiful write. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 16, 2015 at 6:37 AM thanks much James.. =`) your comment is encouraging.. =`)

Carrie Richards November 2, 2015 at 10:02 AM So romantic is your heart !! Love this Olive !! And a great big thank you for my placement in your "yummy" cake and ice cream challenge" !!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 16, 2015 at 6:35 AM thank you so much Carrie, I just tried this form and i thought its nice.. =`)

Paul Callus October 30, 2015 at 6:10 PM Hi Olive_eloi, you make use of this Anacreontic form with a capable pen. Longing for a sweet kiss...thirsty the lips that can for now only be quenched virtually! Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 19, 2015 at 2:36 AM weee, this my first try and you know I always like new forms.. =`) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 5, 2015 at 1:52 AM Paul, thanks much for your comment.. =`)~Olive ELoisa hugs!

Edlynn Nau October 29, 2015 at 3:38 PM This is an absolutely beautiful and sad lyric! The imagery is just perfect little snapshots. Emotionally, you strummed my heartstrings and caused me to think, so very long ago, when my husband died too young. This could be a Free Verse as well as a lyric in that the rhyme is not strict and one can rhym occasionally throughout a Free Verse. I think you could file it under either genre. Just love this Seven(7) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 5, 2015 at 12:56 AM I love your reply Edlynn so appreciate it.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)

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