Of Morality

Dice, the goddess of morals, asked her mother, Themis
Why there's divorce, gambling, abortion, and alcoholism?
Why should dehumanization, like a Bloodstone, beamish?
Why should knives of nemesis nip the knots of neutralism?

Cores of conscience, like collapsed castles, Themis said, crash
The self within the inner sanctum, like sand grains, is split.
Joy, peace, harmony, happiness, and self-fulfillment clash
Empathy and sympathy submit to apathy's conflict.

Demons in humans delicately dominate their domains.
As though white sheep amongst black cattle, they cudgel their brains.
Their will to do good, like delinquent house dogs, is in chains.
Blood of cutthroat competitions, to win, flows in their veins.

Honesty should guide one and all, Themis said to Dice.
Summit of self-splendidness alone will never suffice.

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Date: 1/30/2024 1:21:00 AM
This is a terrific, well written sonnet full of deep, reflective wisdom. The title is profound as well. ‘ cores of conscience, like collapsed castles,’ ‘ empathy and sympathy submit to apathy’s conflict’ amazing lines. The concluding couplet is so insightful. I really enjoyed reading this wonderful, crafted sonnet. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :)::
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Date: 1/29/2024 5:40:00 AM
Oh my, this is such an introspective and deeply soul stirring write that deals with the derailment of human visions from the path of moral values and depicts how the demons in their brains dominate over the seedlings of empathy.. Sigh.. The darkness can overpower many times and unfortunately result in what we call 'reality'.. But without hope and faith, nothing can be brought in the eyes of light.. Your wordplay here is full of wisdom and insightful emotions.. A wonderful write indeed..
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Date: 1/29/2024 6:51:00 AM
I am grateful to you for reading my poem and granting your generous appreciation. In fact, I like your poems very much. I have mentioned it a couple of times. Your poems have a unique flowery linguistic style and rich vocabulary. Wanting to read more from you more.
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