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Of Mans First Temptation Tm

Apple half bitten part satanic example of how gift of iPhone can start love dart! 1st Placement Written 19/12/2020 Sara Kendrick sponsored Trademark Quintain poetry contest 2,4,6,8,2 syllable ababb rhyme

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Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 12/31/2020 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations Krish. There are two poems I wrote one on doctors treating Corona patients and other you see for yourself. Wishing you a happy new year once again. Take care, Rama

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/1/2021 1:38:00 AM

Rama thank you and I am humbled by your very kind gesture! It shows what a clean hearted person you are!! My blessings and Good wishes for the New Year to you and your family!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2020 9:37:00 AM

Now I wonder if a little taste of brand names leads one deeper and deeper? Creative work. Thanks for participating in my contest. Sara

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/1/2021 1:19:00 AM

Sara, thanks for the generosity of my placement and for a unique contest! very different! well done! a Very Happy New Year to you!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/19/2020 4:54:00 PM

Very clever, maestro!! Ingenious write. G.L. in the contest. Happiness and Light, Gershon

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/24/2020 12:49:00 PM

Thanks Gershon. It was a Newtonian moment with the Apple!:)