Of Infinity

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*Image of Cave, Stars, Sky, Tunnel by Pixabay. Of Infinity Source and aim is ... vast consequence, Wherefore controls ... take prominence, Greek's Alpha meant ... primal ascends, Omega states ... constants transcends, Cause steadfast edge ... oppositeness, Expansiveness ... span conscienceless, Space an abstract ... not concreteness, Wander spirits ... lodged comprehends, Source and aim is, Between the two ... points wantonness, License demands ... subconsciousness, Omnipresent ... joined broad bookends, Christ's the answer ... prize providence, Infinity ... stretched mixed strengthens, Source and aim is, 2021 November 07 *1st Place* This or That, Vol 8 ~~Edward Ibeh: Judged 2021 December 05 *HMS & RZ

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 12/5/2021 6:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win in my contest with this brilliant, thought-provoking Rondeau, William:-) You're a poet's poet!

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/5/2021 7:56:00 AM

Edward, a couple of the end rhymed words were questionable until they manifested themselves. Again, a heart filled with gratitude my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2021 3:55:00 PM

Lots of cool end rhymes and great thought in this one, William. I too really liked the "of Infinity" title. I will post mine sometime later!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/16/2021 5:42:00 PM

'Twas funtastic for me, Andrea, hoping yours be more so, greatly appreciated my friend, Aloha!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/12/2021 7:56:00 PM

Such a breath taking view of the vastness of infinity, true, it is an abstract expansiveness, well put~

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/16/2021 5:39:00 PM

If not for Andrea's comment, yours ??? Notification--nil! Late than ne'er, eh! A habitual word I picked up living in Canada. Michelle, thanks aplenty my dear poetess--still, your poems are a world of its own, Aloha!