William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rondeau

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Of Infinity

*Image of Cave, Stars, Sky, Tunnel by Pixabay.

Of Infinity

Source and aim is ... vast consequence,
Wherefore controls ... take prominence,
Greek's Alpha meant ... primal ascends,
Omega states ... constants transcends,
Cause steadfast edge ... oppositeness,

Expansiveness ... span conscienceless,
Space an abstract ... not concreteness,
Wander spirits ... lodged comprehends,
Source and aim is,

Between the two ... points wantonness,
License demands ... subconsciousness,
Omnipresent ... joined broad bookends,
Christ's the answer ... prize providence,
Infinity ... stretched mixed strengthens,
Source and aim is,

2021 November 07
*1st Place*
This or That, Vol 8
~~Edward Ibeh: Judged 2021 December 05

*HMS & RZ

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Edward Ibeh December 5, 2021 at 6:49 AM Congratulations on your top win in my contest with this brilliant, thought-provoking Rondeau, William:-) You're a poet's poet! William Kelii Kekaula December 5, 2021 at 7:56 AM Edward, a couple of the end rhymed words were questionable until they manifested themselves. Again, a heart filled with gratitude my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich November 16, 2021 at 3:55 PM Lots of cool end rhymes and great thought in this one, William. I too really liked the "of Infinity" title. I will post mine sometime later! William Kelii Kekaula November 16, 2021 at 5:42 PM 'Twas funtastic for me, Andrea, hoping yours be more so, greatly appreciated my friend, Aloha!

Michelle Faulkner November 12, 2021 at 7:56 PM Such a breath taking view of the vastness of infinity, true, it is an abstract expansiveness, well put~ William Kelii Kekaula November 16, 2021 at 5:39 PM If not for Andrea's comment, yours ??? Notification--nil! Late than ne'er, eh! A habitual word I picked up living in Canada. Michelle, thanks aplenty my dear poetess--still, your poems are a world of its own, Aloha!