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Anthony Biaanco's Of Ice and Men Poetry Contest

Of Ice and Men

For the jilted women who have loved some men
and felt a love as warm as melted gold
recede from them again and then again,
I write to you about when love grows cold.

Where goes the warmth that once consumed their soul?
When does the gladness vanish from their eyes?
Sweet candy becomes the blackest lump of coal
when you no longer are their fondest prize.

The stare that lingers turns into a glare
that strips you down, but not in a good way.
You feel surrounded by chill polar air,
and no more will you see a sunny day.

With anyone you choose, you roll the dice.
Move on from those whose hearts turn into ice.
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Crandall Avatar
January 1, 2026 at 2:19 PM
Great take on this contest, and a good conclusion!
Williams Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 9:37 PM
Andrea, congrats on your top-6 finish with this poem! Very best, Bartholomew
Jones Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 1:21 PM
A well written poem about dilemma of disappointment and an encouraging ending line! I see why your poem is a winner! Congratulations dear Andrea!
Beaufort Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 1:37 PM
Andrea, we hope people get lucky when it comes to rolling the dice. We do take a chance for sure. Heartbreak is a tough thing to deal with. I think many of us have felt it at some point. I consider myself very lucky to have ultimately found a woman I can love forever. Smiles!!
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 11:59 AM
Half the population is unlucky but I tend to believe a lot of them are too lazy to work on the marriage while some unfortunately are married to monsters
Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 4:22 PM
I just have run into a similar idea in Theodore Roethke's work and then I also thought of a work called Fire and Ice by Robert Frost when I read some of this one. I am sure that being in love with someone then that person walking away unscathed, so it seems. You have done a good job of presenting the theme. Sara K
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 6:10 AM
The emotional transition when a romantic partner’s affection turns to indifference or hostility. It is a direct message to all of us who have repeatedly experienced the withdrawal of intense love. It functions as a piece of advice for healing and moving forward.
May Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 6:26 AM
Some hearts are cold as ice, Very nicely penned
Lawless Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 5:51 AM
Poetically....fantastic emotionally...deflating logically sound for love, like a warming fire can blaze and then settle to embers that must be savored and reignited lest the heat fade and the coldness consume, Oh, did I mention that I really like this one Andrea....a FAVE
George Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 4:30 AM
Love can't stay with women or men who are jilted. The initial warmth will die down in them when they look for fresh pastures. Love that once burned their hearts will turn cold as ice. A bitter truth told beautifully.
Hind Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 7:13 PM
This is very true stuff, Andrea. :(
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 10:32 PM
Sadly.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 5:47 PM
a noteworthy poem about what might be the fickle nature of man? best wishes with this contest entry, hugs
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 10:32 PM
Women can be that way too. But a man is much more likely to kill ya!
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