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Of Fatalism

If I were to listen to and accept the fatalist's speech how could I humbly pray to God and to Him, beseech that He help guide the path on which I should walk? No, I could not, so I denounce such dour dogmatic talk. I refuse to believe my future has already been charted or from the first drawn breath my destiny had started. If that were true, it would mean I would have no choice over what I do or say, who I know, for I'd have no voice. If I had to follow a blueprint, a program already declared, consider me a robot, mentally and emotionally impaired. That idea is an irrational assumption, so I shall abstain from the concept of fatalism, and from its apathy I refrain. What a boring life I'd have if I could not be spontaneous. No surprises if every thought I'd consider, 'miscellaneous.' My psyche would be an empty well, and how terribly unfair if my heart had no free will to choose one for whom I care. If fatalism was stark reality I'd accept fate without blinking, and I'd wander in my existence without need of thinking. I don't think things simply happen based on circumstance, for I believe we are guided by our own designs and chance. If everything was preconceived, I could never be emotive and set no goals to reach because I wouldn't have a motive. Fatalism is an illusory impression, a blight upon the mind, and to that doctrine's point of view, I refuse to be confined. August 14, 2022 This or That, Vol 13 Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 9/4/2022 10:12:00 AM
Fatalism can be victimizing, can it not? Congratulations on your top win Jenna! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/4/2022 1:18:00 PM
It can. Thanks a bunch, Linda.
Date: 9/4/2022 9:59:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win with this outstanding poem, Jenna:-). Have a blessed Sunday!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/4/2022 1:18:00 PM
Thanks so very much for liking this one enough to have made your winning list, Edward.
Date: 8/14/2022 5:37:00 PM
A high school "religion" teacher had us discussing the intricacies of foreknowledge and predestination. He was one of the best teachers we ever had. After much deliberation I concluded that even if i knew the pitcher was going to throw me a curve i probably couldn't hit it.......
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/14/2022 6:31:00 PM
ha John. We are creatures of stubbornness and free will, aren't we? Thanks for your insight and information.
Date: 8/14/2022 11:14:00 AM
Que Sera Sera Jenna! or perhaps not, could you imagine society if everybody adopted fatalism as a way of life, even Hawking says in his quote a lot of hypocrisy surrounds this doctrine, you put a very good argument forward that it is a blight on the mind, an excellently penned piece, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/14/2022 6:30:00 PM
Hi, David. We'd be a world filled with Zombies, walking around and murmuring, "Que sera sera." No thanks for that vision. It's not living! I very much appreciate your reading and commenting.
Date: 8/14/2022 8:47:00 AM
An exceptionally erudite poem, so well-written, and raising so many questions for rational inquiry. I enjoyed your poem immensely, Jenna. I can see it used as a springboard for many fine philosophical discussions, and, if I were still teaching Philosophy of Religion, I would share it with my classes. Very good.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/14/2022 6:28:00 PM
Milt, knowing your history, I consider it quite an honor that you perceive my poem as teaching material for a class. I will remember your comments with great pleasure. Thank you for offering me your trust. I'm grateful.

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