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Of dreams and reality

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Written 5/06/2024

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11 syllables each line, 8 lines 

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just pour me a drink, love, deep from your cold heart, I shall sip slowly, reality that’s life, share your frozen bosom, once of me a part, chill facts, parting ways, you shall not be my wife, let dreams remain dreams, I wish you a new start, through time, changing seasons rumours shall stay rife, in myriad miracles of sunshine, rain, love deals some, great happiness! and for some, pain!

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Date: 6/30/2024 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations Krish! Your empowering poem "Of Dreams and Reality" has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem earned you a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done, my friend.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/30/2024 12:46:00 PM
Thanks Emile! Honoured! Pleased to find myself on the list with other wonderful poets of PS! Thanks for this challenging contest! always brings the best out from poets!

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