Of Crayon Box Dreams

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For Miranda Hawley's Sonnet Contest

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I find a box of crayons on a desk.
At different colors I take a look.
I think of each color as picaresque -
as something or somebody in a book.

Three blues I see, such as blue-violet.
Blue-green might be a sailor’s home at sea.
Blue-violet could be a girl he’d met. 
Purple is sky darkened, making him flee.

Although their passion had been orange-red -
black became his heart. He left love behind.
The girl’s heart, carnation pink, feels brown dead.
The cheer of yellow I now need to find.

I’ll draw a sun, and yellow I will use.
These dreamy crayons have too many blues.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 6/15/2025 4:25:00 PM
What a creative winner you have in this one. Way to go. Congratulations on your name being on the winners' list. Sara K
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Date: 6/13/2025 3:39:00 AM
I love this colourful rhythm...a day dream so bright.
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Date: 6/12/2025 5:54:00 AM
Your poem paints such a vivid picture of emotion. Each line feels like it carries its own heartbeat. I love how you capture the raw depth of this feeling while keeping the flow so beautifully natural. Truly a powerful piece!
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Date: 5/29/2025 1:46:00 AM
Your prompt is wonderfully written, but then you are one of the few best poets on the soup. A great sonnet.
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Date: 5/28/2025 10:40:00 AM
Oh, I love this. "The girl’s heart, carnation pink, feels brown dead" that's perfect... please check my reply on my recent poem, :)
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Date: 5/28/2025 10:36:00 AM
Wow, nice to create such a poem on crayon colors. Your taalent will make anything come alive.
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Date: 5/28/2025 7:46:00 AM
This is a cute prompt, and youv used it so well here dear sweet andrea, i love the flow and creative way youve woven words for this, especially love "I’ll draw a sun, and yellow I will use. These dreamy crayons have too many blues." Ahhh the cadence! So catchy! I love painting and coloring altho crayons arent my favorite, i might use crayons soon haha. Pleasure reading! Sending you light! Best wishes
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Date: 5/28/2025 7:19:00 AM
Excellent sonnet, Andrea. It may be a sign of the times (or just me) but I seem to be attracted to the sad or more depressed themed poems lately. Perfect use of metaphors. Good luck in the contest.
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