Odyssey

odyssey of life surfing waves high on the sea posted on April 8, 2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/9/2018 8:27:00 AM

Such a unique take on life's journey, so imaginatively expressed --- and even in three lines the reader (me) feels a sustained metaphor as if it were a sonnet! Magnificent! I think that you have become my Haiku idol and (hopefully) mentor (from afar). As always, best wishes, Line! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/9/2018 8:45:00 AM

LOL I am much too modest to let you carry on with such lofty ideals. But I am thrilled to inspire you. The secret to awesome haikus is totally with the reader who does all the work of conjuring up meaning and beauty... so take a bow.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/8/2018 1:02:00 PM

With a chorus of winds summoning the waves to swell to a roar... Good imagery...Happy Sunday...

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/8/2018 1:24:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Arturo. Much appreciated.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 4/8/2018 11:27:00 AM

I think this is an absolute ideal and perfect analogy served haiku style. Profound and I was touched enough to want to fav to sav to ponder. A WOW from me ... CayCay - doing the fav thing before my brain ....

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/8/2018 1:24:00 PM

Thank you so much, CayCay. Most appreciated.