Ode To Trevor

We'd really like to thank you
i'm sure you left it here with love,
it really was so kind of you
but we didn't want your bug.

We thought you'd like to know
we really felt the pits
we thought of you quite often
when we had the squits.

Next time you come to visit
please leave your bugs at home,
'cause, when you bring them with you
they sure do like to roam.

So next time that we see you
I hope you come alone,
you can bring Rosie and Katie
but leave your bugs at home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Mehta Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 6:29 AM
A fine Ode and congratulations on the fine win jacque
A  Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 2:26 PM
JACQUE, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 7:41 PM
leave your bugs at home. Such a cute refrain! congrats on your HM, Jacque
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your win Jacque in Jared Pickett's "The Ode" contest. Love,Carol
Mehta Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of jared, jacue
Sweetheart Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 5:03 AM
Congrats jacque on your HM in Jared's contest with this magnificent entry on your special muse.. enjoy this honor today with luv..
Fraser Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 6:14 AM
Made me chuckle this one, oh those sickly bugs >> James
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