Ode To the Plastic Comb

Sing praises to the toothless grin
of the plastic, pocket comb;
who through many heads 
of boys and men
its plastic tines have flown.
Working magic in the masculine hands,
putting astray stains of hair in place,
as the holder stares into a mirror,
admiring their own face.

Carried in back pockets of
jeans, khakis and shorts;
sat upon on hard surfaces -
some tines start to abort.
Thin tines on one end
for the finest head of hair;
thicker teeth on the other
with large gaps of spaces there.

Left behind on counters,
in kitchen drawers and in bathrooms;
discarded due to some missing teeth,
but for others still worth a groom.
Looking for that perfect look
are many men and boys;
hopeful that this plastic tool
leads to future romantic joys.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dailey Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 10:20 AM
Nice poem. I have to get back to reading your poems on a daily basis. Mike
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