Ode To the Old Lover, Whose Question

His "Did the nuns teach you
your female power?" went un-
answered in that brief hour he
fell back spent.  His, the wonder,
his, the glory of that old story.  Here
the breasts with which I entered,
pink-tipped and round, and here 
the bush, "Pretty," men pronounced 
who roared as carnivores
at convent shores where all
delight they thought was stored.
Lovers, I never saw as dead
were welcomed vowless
to my bed.  Gone, the prowess,
the eager hands, the binding
spell.  Pray Sister, when
you are cold and lifeless,
you will behold what 
shell this body was, yet
served you well.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/21/2009 10:02:00 AM
Sorry, Nola, I'm having a little trouble getting perspective on this one. The layout and continuance are spellbinding. "At convent shores where all delight they thought was stored" Have you at one time been in a convent. Sorry to be so thick. Let me know. And, yes, by all means you may read my stuff anywhere you choose...thanks. Love, daver
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Date: 2/16/2009 4:59:00 PM
Awesome, Nola! I went to Catholic schools as well, and it took me a long time to understand why the boys who used to shoot elastic bands on me suddenly thought I should date them!?# Love this, Carolyn
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