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1432 Your Choice Contest 
Sponsor Brian Strand 
7th Place

"Those who labour in the earth are the chosen people of God" — Thomas Jefferson

Ode To Summer's End

The swallow has gone,
flown away, so has its mellow song
And so forth we go,
into bluer skies—indigo
Tempts drift further till tepid
Southern shades should not bid 
Amid its alibi is incidence,
sun shrinks in appearance
Grayest shadows deepen  
The first cool breezeway creeps in
Much warmth shall be ebbing,
heralding winter's woolen webbing
I count my blessings
of summer’s endings:
Abundance of sunshine so bright
Zephyrs on a tender August night                             
Book clubbing with best of friends,
Labor Day weekend marks summer’s end
As Summer ends Fall shall begin,
and what joyful gifts a winding wind
against glistening skin
Autumns kiss of this kind,
an earthly bliss entwined 
And when the swallow returns,
no longer summer yearns
no longer summer yearns
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Jones Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations on your win with your lovely Ode poem Anaya!
Jones Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 3:26 PM
Wow number 35???? Nice quote! Also love how your Ode to Summer's End embraces and journeys through seasons before and after summer. Your word choice is melodic with perfect rhyme! I can see why your poem is a winner!
Anaya Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 8:00 AM
Thank you Karen. I submitted at the last minute, think I was #35 ha. Merry Christmas! Happy Kawanzaa:)
Narain Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 10:23 AM
Beautiful poem saying goodbye to summer and welcoming autumn. In a few months, you will see all the hills around in the Los angeles valley.
Anaya Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 6:41 PM
The hills shall come alive with vibrant colors. I'm all in! Tyvm __xhugs
Gifford Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 4:07 AM
Hello Anaya, beautifully penned and an enjoyable read. A lovely goodbye to Summer and a nice welcome to Autumn. Have a great day.
Anaya Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 3:24 PM
Thanks Zyrool for the review and day wishes!
Rolland Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 7:25 PM
so delicious , loved it all, alliterations and music, images, this is brilliant, enjoyed very much
Anaya Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 3:23 PM
Ah, I like your review, Yann! I'll miss August especially, and good friendships. TyVm xhugs__Anaya
Anaya Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 5:42 PM
Work in progress while the long Labor Day weekend is fresh in mind, there is more to add..and shall follow up with the banned book club... hope your holiday was a lovely one! :D
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