Ode To Rita and Maddie

Wade through the lake’s water so shallow, A woman & a man hands entwined like a gallow. Wade did she, Wade did he. Above their necks the furious waters rose, Trod they together steps softly with no morose, Spellbound they moved without a care, Deeper and deeper where no one would dare. Trod they further unto the middle they reached, Realized she now an early vow she had breached, No further she could wade, But bitter memories afar refrained they to fade. Drifting by now so weak was she, So clasped them eyelids so all she could see was he, A time came on when a boat roared by, A wave it created ,it washed her eyes. The heady din grown a was peaking, Alas! Her dream was at an end that she was seeking. The fingered band, beacon it began, A time had come her life to regain. Realized, she that moments spent in love, Will fly away now like the dove. Struck her like a bolt to her love away, Will he take me home today? Guessed she by now that the time was over for her space, And on the pathway her love left behind in a cold place. A now thinks she that dwells in another dimension, Poor man left aghast to brood and fate too cruel to mention. Ghastly her act ,in all this land had never been, People shun now the disheartened lover whenever he be rarely seen. Stares does he strangely at the door, For he believes that the path will bring her once more…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Goudreau Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 12:41 PM
A moving and heartfelt piece delivered with poignant emotions and sentiments. A masterpiece dear friend. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Excellently accomplished!
Prabhu Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 1:12 AM
aMILLION thanks to you Suzanne for the warm wishes
Scholtz Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sashi. Elizabeth
Prabhu Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 7:27 AM
thank you Elizabeth for the wishes....namaste.
Keny Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 4:08 PM
A beautiful Poem Mr. Sashi, My heartiest congratulations to you for this feat. I really enjoyed this.
Prabhu Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 7:26 AM
thank you very much for the kind wishes Sir. i am overwhelmed with happiness.
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January 9, 2012 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations on the week`s win Maddie!! :) oxox love from Anne-Lise
Prabhu Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 10:50 AM
thanx a million and u r right ..i was called maddie....that was a long time back... eons ago....
Brown Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sashi. I wish you the best in 2012 with your writing. Love, Carol
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January 9, 2012 at 9:00 AM
thanks you for the warm wishes Carol...
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December 25, 2011 at 10:21 AM
my of my favs
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