Ode To Orpheus and the Magic of His Song

How beautiful the music that he made;
his lilting song was carried by the breeze
and waves of water, and the lyre he played
sent all the birds to singing in the trees.

All creatures of the forest he entranced.
The magic of his song made them alert,
and even rocks nearby the rivers danced,
and thus, a river’s course he could divert!

Upon his death, how mournful was the song
which even then had power to amaze
all those who heard its tune floating along
the river to the shore. His music stays
inside the hearts of those whose words endear
us to the magic which they still can hear.

Oct. 10, 2017 
For John Hamilton's 'Your best sonnet October1-December31,2017' Contest
(sorry, my best romance was already a winner in another of your contests!!)
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Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Fabulous poem, Andrea. I love the magical setting and your title. Congrats on your win with this beauty.
George   Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Great sonnet, Andrea. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Scars Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 10:46 AM
great sonnet sweet lady! congrats :)-luloo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 10:25 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on your fine win.
Ashley Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 9:09 PM
I remember this superb sonnet, Andrea. Congratulations for your wonderful win. ~Susan
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 6:02 PM
This is beautifully composed Andrea. Congratulations on your win! Lovely! : )
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 6:21 PM
connie, I feel bad it's not my best sonnet since October, but I had already entered my best one in the last contest the judge posted!! thanks, anyway, It's my second best at least
Hamilton Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 5:32 PM
Congrats Andrea on a fine sonnet and placement!
Parker Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:46 PM
congratulations dear poet on your placement...sonneteers are like musketeers, all for one, one for all
Haight Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your fine placement in the contest with your lovely Sonnet. Hugs, Sandra
Duet Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 10:17 PM
Wow Andrea! Another win? Do you ever get tired of winning? lol NOT! lol Congrats on this great little poem. I would have loved to hear that lyre.
Krampe Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:23 PM
Coming back with congrats on your top win, Andrea!
Evans Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 4:25 PM
"His lilting song was carried by the breeze". Some excellent personification in this poem. Thanks for sharing............peace!
Michaels Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 5:59 AM
Lovely imagery and flow, Andrea. Congrats on your First Place win! Regards, John.
Flower Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 12:41 AM
Simply beautiful. Congrats, Andrea. :)
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Andrea - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! I didn't get mine done in time ... too much family drama at present. Loved the classic take to this! :-)
Roper Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 3:41 PM
No matter it is beautiful :) Congratulations on your win ..... Hugs Eve ~`*
Ashley Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 2:05 PM
Returning to congratulate you Andrea on the your fantastic first place win with your wondrous write! Superb!!
Kannan Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:08 AM
Such a beautiful write Andrea... You are really amazing... Congratulations on your well deserved win...
Murray Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 8:02 AM
When you mentioned you must hurry to enter this contest I knew I was done for Andrea. Such a lovely melodic sonnet. Congratulations on top placement.
Smith Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 5:40 AM
Congrats Andrea, a lovely poem :)
One Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 5:27 AM
I loved your traditional sonnet, it flowed so well Andrea.. You do this form very well. A beatuiful doe to a mythical legend.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Anish Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 7:04 PM
nice take on the myth. keep up the fine verse peace matthew anish
Mhangwa Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 1:39 PM
Beautiful poem that you have here Andrea! So beautiful!
Tor Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 10:08 PM
Wonderful write that painted musical lyrics in my mind. Nicely done Andrea...
Vaso Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 9:59 PM
Hi Andrea, enjoyed this poem! :)
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