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Ode To My Son On His 28th Birthday

When I looked up at you the other night I saw you coming through the door Framing it with your amazing smile steadfast, self assured, a happy man A happy Dutch life with Irish sea-kissed roots Not just a European but a world class man As you stood before me, I felt such pride. When I think of you, I see my little boy blue Forever young, blond mop, those winsome sky eyes my spry child, intelligent, forever questioning hyperactive, mischievous, a little dare devil your smile, a mile wide in times of trouble I see you holding your teddies Ruby and Rupert Tractors, diggers, broken engines brrrrrrrmm. Your love of engines, paid off after all as you shifted gear to driving instruction For a guy who showed no interest in being a scholar Now you are the teacher, with a flurry of pupils I think it works better, this way around. Your greatest gift is your love for people Your greatest asset, your winning smile Keep on living and loving as you do You view life through a positive lens Becoming a mother hit me with a new perspective An appreciation of life, when I gave you yours Together we grew, and continue to grow In love and respect, now and forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/23/2011 5:14:00 AM
I guess all parents feel the same kinds of emotions when they see grown up children....my son is also about 28 and I feel the same exactly.....I can never forget his brrrrrrmmm.......it stays in memory forever, a sort of immortality, and of course his memories of me are also "immortal" I feel this is possibly how spirits go on into eternity, living in others' minds....Syd
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:15:00 AM
im sorry but this is the only way i know to get in touch i just want to thank you for your comment on my poem 30 years can i just say tho this is not me its about a guy i met a few years ago he told me his story so i put it to paper can i just say ive read some of your prose and they are wonderful once again thanks perhaps i need to start putting a disclaimer at the foot of my poems
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:42:00 AM
WOW! What a tremendous piece! Stunning!
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Date: 1/12/2011 4:42:00 PM
Eiken, Has he seen this? When he does I'm sure it'll mean a lot to him to know that you're very proud of him... Sometimes we don't tell them often enough, how proud they make us. Blessings to you all! Love, your frend, Annalise
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