Ode To My Plastic Angel

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With a feathery smile on her chiseled face 
she looks as angelic as the real ones in the sky 
adorning my window ledge she fills up every space,   
like any proper angel would normally do;
I hear her whisper at the edge of night  
secrets that were meant for me alone 
She quietly supports my every prayer 
this little angel of God, who never goes abroad ;

She is a stationary idol of the highest order 
she comforts me each night with her presence and grace  
and although she cannot see my face,  
she knows every hidden feeling I encase, 
every hope, every desire, every fear that I misplace.

I, a weather beaten traveler of life's weary journey 
gives ode to this lovely altar Angel, she is a reminder
that Angels do exist, she may be made of plastic but to me, 
she is a living, breathing, object of great valor 
when I pray. 

Feb 27, 2023
Sponsor	Jeff Kyser
Contest Name	Write an Ode |

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/8/2023 6:59:00 PM
Sweet, sweet, sweet Vie! Never alone as your angel is always there. Congratulations ! :)
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Date: 3/9/2023 2:36:00 AM
Thank you dear Alice for commenting, Love and light, Vie
Date: 3/1/2023 5:03:00 PM
Very touching, makes me think of the minature angels my mother would have on her dresser, I especially like the lines 'she knows every hidden feeling/every fear I misplace' - so well expressed, best of luck with the contest~
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Date: 2/28/2023 3:30:00 AM
- What a sweet angel, Vie Rose :) - Angels come in different materials and shapes ... there is an angel in every room of mine... even in the bathroom :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/28/2023 2:11:00 AM
Angels do exist, even if made of plastic. Wonderful verse. Hugs.
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Date: 2/27/2023 11:35:00 PM
very touching and sweet, thanks to your angel for the lovely poem, i am sure he is not only plastic, have a great day yann
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Date: 2/27/2023 4:47:00 PM
Very sweet Rosie:) You did well with a very difficult form. Think about Homer writing "Illiad and the Odyssey" how long that took.
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Date: 2/27/2023 6:43:00 PM
Thank you dear Daniel for appreciating the Angle poem, God bless
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