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5/19/2026 for Ode to Cat Poetry Contest sponsored by JCB Brul

Ode to Kitty

Dear Kitty, today, I sing your everlasting praise,
I, your humble Frisky, dog next door,
bark a heartfelt word and phrase,
though, both of us are alive no more,
and, though my hackles, you did raise
when you walked upon the wall
dividing our two yards.
To eat you, I tried hard,
but I could only jump so high, and never did you fall. 

Dear Kitty, it's heaven now where we two play
as we while away each blessed day, 
where up here, too, a wall divider,
where you may tease and prance.
as I bark, "I want my teeth inside her,
if she'd just give me a chance".
There is no other cat than thee,
for me to chase, I truly say,
to Kitty, the cat that won't ever fall, for all eternity.
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Terry Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 11:36 AM
I had an elderly cat when I was younger. My family wasn't certain how she would deal with a puppy when we adopted it, but the kitty adored the dog and I'm sure that they are in Heaven, too.
Crandall Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 6:08 PM
That's interesting. I haven't had too many pets, just that dog Frisky, so I don't know much about how animals relate, but I have heard sometimes dogs and cats get along pretty well, and I know dogs sometimes get along with each other and sometimes they don't. I guess they can be complicated, like people.
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 11:16 AM
This is so delightful. Wonderful way to do a fictional ode. Love it
Crandall Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 6:08 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Crandall Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 6:06 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Rodgers Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 9:30 AM
hEllo David, made me smile in that tender, crooked way only pets can. I liked the old rivalry softened by eternity, the dog who never stopped dreaming of one impossible leap, the cat who ruled every wall with effortless disdain. What a small, bright afterlife just two spirits still playing out. I’m savoring the humor wrapped in devotion. Blessings, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 8:14 PM
Hi Daniel, I'm glad you got the full flavor of this interaction. I used to feel sorry for Frisky and hate Kitty. Frisky would bark her head off, and throw herself against the wall over and over, hour after hour, while the cat, hour after hour slowly walked back in forth on the wall. It wasn't until several decades later, that I decided that both of these animals were making the best use of their time. Frisky, was just manifesting her true self, which is the key to self-actualization. For Frisky, it's not the destination, it's the journey.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 9:26 AM
What a cute write. Love It..... "Good Luck" Have a blessed/great day writing away.............
Crandall Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 8:52 PM
Thanks, Paula - a true story!
Crandall Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 8:11 PM
Thanks, Paula - a true story!
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