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Ode to Autumn

How spectacular your crisp, cold colors, Autumn dear, your bright & brilliant hues. The fruition of success & failure, previous; Culminated countenance of consequence. Bold can be those leafy reflections from bud To crown, the readiness to share the Fall. It was your choice, Autumn dear, to steer Toward perfection or depression, in trial. Do you gather your bundle around your feet Fretting and frenetic, leaves wet with despair, or Do your colors gamble about like a wooly lamb, Reminding the young of a rainbow’s halo? Do you fear a latter season or let go your shapes With holy anticipation, excitement at your fingertips? Slow bustling of the wind, gentle shake of limbs; Creative hustling, vivacity of freshness let loose. Lovely your perspicacity and personality, sparkling With a thick accent; nay, the dampening of dour Spirits, fretting at losing your springiness, your green. Wake up! Shake up your dreams! Youths love Your rain, your jewel carpeting - they walk in Your footsteps; enhance the next generation Not with mildness, but with potential, using Every bit of your wit and wile, your future hope. Brighten those smiles with every shake of your head; Even your baldness, crooked and ancient limbs. Dear Autumn, you leave room for new sow & reap; For coddled and courageous seed; newborn buds. Autumn, less is more, more or less; nonsense We don’t speak; no madness of spectral tongue. Serendipity as pumpkins dance with flaming eyes, As grand mas and pas blink back their yesteryears. Three wholesome cheers for oaks, maples, even Evergreens; for every tree that participates in life And death on earth, rebirth, sentience, flirtation. Live well, this latter season! Be tested! Thrive!

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Date: 8/15/2025 10:05:00 PM
Amazing ode, Kim. Your ability to describe so many things is such creative imagery is a great talent, my friend. Your use of metaphor was striking. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 8/15/2025 2:46:00 PM
"Do you gather your bundle around your feet Fretting and frenetic, leaves wet with despair, or Do your colors gamble about like a wooly lamb, Reminding the young of a rainbow’s halo?" I love this syntax, Kim - "no madness of spectral tongue" that's really deep... thanks for this gift today <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2025 3:28:00 PM
Thank you kindly! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/15/2025 11:17:00 AM
WOW!!! What a lovely write/story you have here. Love It... Autumn is a great time of the year. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2025 12:01:00 PM
Best not wile away the warm day, but still looking forward to Autumn. Thank you, dear Paula!
Date: 8/15/2025 6:24:00 AM
exquisitely composed with great metaphor layers, really enjoyed this one:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2025 6:54:00 AM
I really appreciate it! So glad you liked this one!

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