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Ode To a Retiring Master

As each squall breaks the random motion starts Leaves twigs and dust in chaos whirl and skitter Yet at its core remains a still calm heart The land shall be restored to a pristine glitter But this metaphor denies a truth thereon That neath that placid heart there is motion frantic As vigorous paddling of the gliding swan Not still, though cool and smoothing surface antic Thus these images of one who many a year Maintained a calm at eye of every storm Was anchor to this college barque sans peer Then held its course to waters clear and warm 16 September 2019 Poem in exactly 100 words

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Date: 9/17/2019 5:47:00 PM
wow, you did very well in this undertaking. I hope to try this soon myself. Good luck in the contest, Geoffrey.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 9/20/2019 6:24:00 AM
Thanks , Andrea. Good luck to you.
Date: 9/16/2019 8:47:00 AM
Appearances can be deceiving --- beautifully expressed, Geoffrey, and in exactly 100 words. Elegantly penned. ~ Gershon
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 9/20/2019 6:23:00 AM
Thank yo very much, Gershon

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