Ode To a Misguided Mouser

There was a young feline named Jackson,
Who wanted a piece of the action.
While hunting for rats, Jack
Got into a spat, with a strange little
Creature known to us as a bat.
 
This then is the fact of the matter.
The bat proved as 'mad as a hatter'.
And it paid with it's life,
Causing Jackson much strife:
Bad luck for the poor little ratter.
 
They arrested the cat in a hurry
And woe to this poor furry purry.
Without even a trial, he was put on 'The Mile'
Where his life became drab and quite dreary.
 
Jack's been sitting there day after day,
Quite bored and just pining away.
While dreaming of mousies and birds on the wing,
Of hair balls and catnip and such kitty things.
 
"How long, oh how long must I pay?
Please won't someone just whisk me away?
Back to my home where a kitty can roam
And stay out-of-doors all live, long day."
 
The end of this tale I hope tell,
Will find Jack finally leaving his cell,
To be welcomed back home, once again
Free to roam, older and wiser and well.
 
"No more bats for this cat",  Jackson moans.
And it seems that he's learned on his own:
It's far better than not, to keep up with ones shots,
Than call three feet of jail space your home! 


© 2015 Diane Lefebvre

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/18/2015 1:50:00 PM
DIANE, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 3/31/2015 1:34:00 PM
So cleaver! I couldn't help but grin while reading it. Reminds me of a furry purry of my own!
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Diane Lefebvre
Date: 3/31/2015 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Logan. Those furry purrys need protection from their own follies, that is for sure. They go where angels fear to tred, left to their own devises.
Date: 3/5/2015 11:34:00 AM
This jerks at our funny bone in innocent fun, playing with mates with an attitude. You have fun with this piece from start to finish and it brings a smile to my day. It allows time to lighten the mind and soul and just have some fun with words and thoughts without the weight of a mission statement. Emile. #7
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Diane Lefebvre
Date: 3/5/2015 2:00:00 PM
To know you have put a smile on another's face, tends to put a smile on your own, Emile. Smiles I find, are contagious. Thank you for your thoughts and very positive comments.
Date: 3/5/2015 10:42:00 AM
Hey Diane, stopped by for a visit. This is a great poem filled with so much imagery and insight from the cats' point of view. You have a wonderful gift and writing ability to have turned that article into a well written treasure piece!! Be Blessed, Neva
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Diane Lefebvre
Date: 3/5/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Neva. I am new to this site and it is nice to immediately receive positive comments. You will find as time goes by that I am an animal lover and much of my poetry reflects this.
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