Ode To a Cockatiel

Ode to the Cockatiel

You exasperate me. 
The most maddening creature
To walk, 
Waveringly across the tabletop
Drawn by an invisible wire
To my bowl
You stand
On the tips of your claws
Four scaly toes strain
You peer 
Over the edge 
And take a nibble
Of what’s inside.
Did you like it, little bird?
Your beak smiles 
As you climb, 
Perch 
on the rim of my bowl
And with neat bites 
Eat my breakfast.
And I wonder, 
Why do I keep you around, 
You have no manners.
Sometimes I admire
Your slender tail, 
Body the color of a storm cloud
Head the color of the sun
With two orange embers burning in your cheeks
And the elegant, 
Filmy 
Swoop of crest.
I pick you up
Light enough to sit on my finger; 
I no longer marvel at that, 
Long ago becoming accustomed
To the marvel living in my home, 
I take you and
I scratch your head 
I feel the softness of your feathers
Between my fingers 
I feel your skull
And realize you are much more fragile
Than you like to let on,
You sweet bird,
Resting your head on my thumb
Trusting me completely. 
And then my thumb displeases you;
You must attack it. 
Hissing and pretending to bite it
And I smile
At my 
Utterly confounding
Cockatiel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/13/2018 4:42:00 PM
A very enjoyable read. Cockatiels do have personality.
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Date: 6/25/2018 7:49:00 AM
Claire.. I loved reading your poem over a cup of hot coffee this morning. Your write is interesting and it was a joy to read!
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Date: 6/24/2018 4:27:00 PM
Ahh, such a lovely poem it is. Ceetainly a joy to read, a very warm welcome to you on poetrysoup, I am sure that you will enjoy your long stay here, good luck and continue to write
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Date: 6/24/2018 3:44:00 PM
I love birds and I love your represention of your pet Claire.A very sweet and endearing piece.
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