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Ode To a Blockhead

Just scrap metal in your bellow?
Is your pedal, mellowed old?

Poor old friend, you've lost your wheels
You dream in color, of rubber burning,...
where coughed exhaust, was left behind.

Now we're lost, two junk yard pals
Relics, that have rusted time.
Just a pile of dented fenders,
suspended… here, in desert sand.

Jammed and stacked, we'll make a pact
perhaps the two of us can make a dime.
A part of you, a part of me.....perhaps they'll make some artsy thing

Snap, crackle, hot and Popular Mechanic, 
They should come and fix us up 
Woe is you!   You junk yard dog,
something smolders in your trunk!
Smells of socks, perhaps a skunk?

Once so dandy, someone's bug
Not so handy, you can't move.
How many horses, under that hood...? 
I would push you if I could !
Scratch my back and I'll scratch yours
I'd paint you blue, and paint you bright,
If I could, to set you right
New transmission, lubed and oiled
Anti freeze to make you sneeze

Honest Engine, we'll get our kicks,
I'll fix you up, and grab the stick

Headin' down Route 66........

Get off me blockhead......we are fixed !

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12/10/14  For The "East Jesus" contest: Image number 5
Sponsored by Roy Jergen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yates Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 9:28 AM
I once had a Volkswagon bus. Good description of that junkyard dog.
Guzzi Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Cool Carrie I had no idea what to write for this LOL- you go gal! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Devnath  Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 7:36 AM
Excellent poem enjoyed from you. Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 12:07 AM
this is so cool, carrie. you and jan were sure on the same wave length the way you interpreted this picture. congrats!
A   Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 11:51 PM
Carrie, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 7:07 PM
congratulations Carrie on this win, well done
Haight Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Carrie, I really enjoyed your personification of these junk yard pals! Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandras
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Congrats Carrie for this great work; I must confess I really enjoy this,have a joyful Weekend my friend...huggs
Yvonne Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:28 AM
Excellent job with this challenge. Congratulations on your top win.
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:18 AM
we chose the same image but totally different take on the theme - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Carrie! Wish u a very happy new year 2015 my friend!
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 11:14 AM
Hi Carrie. Wish you and your family a Merry Christmas.Love and regards from me-Rajat
Richards Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 1:01 PM
Thank you! And the same to you Rajat, wishing you happiness and health in the New Year !!
Kayode Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Merry Christmas Carrie,the blockhead must for real get off, it's Christmas time...huggs
Mehta Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 7:07 AM
I enjoyed the light humor in the poem, Merry Christmas, Carrie
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