Odd Dancer

Young lady, you have danced quite well for me.
It was amazing how your body moves.
You have the attributes of your mother.
What a fine example of style and grace!
All your mother’s beauty is in your face.
I have many more years of life than you.
You made me wish to be a younger man.
Everyone in the audience loves you.
I wish to keep the promise I have made.
You can have all the riches you demand.
However, you come and ask me for this?
I find your request difficult to grant.
Why do you want me to take this man’s life?
Why do you want his head on a platter?
Unusual it is, but you have it!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Free Verse Writers" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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November 11, 2012 at 11:34 PM
MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR AWESOME WIN MY DEAR FRIEND, ROBERT! love/hugs, LG
Sweetheart Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 11:24 PM
CONGRATS ROBERT ON A BRILLIANT WRITE AND WIN FOR FREE VERSE LUV ..
D. Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 7:28 PM
' Good win' Nate
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations Robert,on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "For The Sake Of Free Verse". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 8:50 AM
Good to see you in the top 10 Robert. Congratulations on your inspiring Free verse and it honored ninth place. Agape, Mose
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February 21, 2011 at 9:05 PM
Wow! Excellent poem on John the Baptist. What a unique perspective. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 6:43 PM
Hi Robert, Many congrat's on your BIG WIN, with this fine Free Verse rendering, Lainie
Mehta Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 5:20 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of Chris, Robert
Onclaud Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 9:33 AM
i like this the frist time i read it! SUOER congrats for hitting the charts, bob! :) huggs, nette
Neels Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 9:26 AM
Interesting recount of John the Baptist's death Robert.. Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest ;)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 7:05 AM
Congrats Robert on your wonderful success in the free verse contest luv.. enjoy another chart topping win with luv...for an excellent entry...
Mannan Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 3:08 AM
This is very unique and thought provoking write. An honour to share this position with you. many congrats for this win
K. Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 11:05 PM
Congrats Robert on your win with this very interesting poem about John the Baptist's death...
Henderson Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 10:36 PM
Very good Robert. I'm amazed I didn't see the premise until I read the next to last line. Thanks for the heads up on "Manna". I actually looked up canopy and still managed to spell it wrong. I appreciate all your comments on my poetry. Charles
Sweetheart Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 4:40 PM
Salome and the dance of the seven veils is an age old story with a valuable lesson .. nicely penned Robert with modern day language still has same meaning and wisdom attached luv..
Onclaud Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 4:14 PM
i'm mystified here, bob... a grating, layered piece that can be interpreted in many ways... dazzling stuff! :) huggs, nette
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