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Octopus

Deadly intelligent life form At the bottom of the sea I am from planet confused What did I do with my glasses I can not see them ha Everything a joke Ha ha blind as a bat My big eyes are not great My name is octopus You are under my control look at the arms Look at the arms I am certifying myself mad in the head Look at the arms I am lost with so many arms hanging down Confused dot. com. I would need to be they are driving me crazy Keeping so many arms busy My brain can not cope with all the stress I will just have to use two arms a time Easier to control will ignore the rest for now Just keep one eye on them To much for my brain to handle I think I am going cross eyed Sending me blind moving about look at the arms Look at the arms Medusa of the deep Minus the body Cold and lonely down here In a tizzy watching My mind can not sleep Look at the arms Theirs no arm in me really

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Date: 9/8/2013 7:19:00 PM
A very interesting and unique poem that did make me smile! I can also relate to the feeling of nowhere to go and nothing to do which drives me crazy at times! Then there are times when there is so much to do that I wish I had eight arms! Great work on this piece! I enjoyed it!
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Date: 8/30/2013 11:18:00 AM
: )Gave me a chuckle..but it makes one ponder..Very clever
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/30/2013 3:08:00 PM
I AM A LITTLE ON THE CRAZY SIDE AT TIMES NOT IN A BAD WAY I WOULD SAY THE ROOM LIT UP WHEN YOU SMILED BEAUTIFUL COMMENT APPRECIATED DEEPLY

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