Notes About The Poem

Octo-bug

Chilly the Penguin reached his shop and checked his bunch of keys
He opened up his clothing store and hoped that he could please
A spider came in from the cold, some winter wear to choose
He told the penguin shopkeeper, “I need much warmer shoes.”

“Would that be four matching pairs?” the shopkeeper enquired
The spider looked surprised and said, “That many aren’t required.”
The penguin looked confused and said, “My adding isn’t great,
But even I can count your legs and see that you’ve got eight.”

The spider shook his head and said, “Do you not understand,
I only want shoes for my feet, to walk on frozen land.
There's snow and ice outside today, which every penguin loves,
But spiders need three pairs of shoes, and, for snowballs… gloves!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 8:15 PM
Very, very cute. I've got to 'hand it to you,' Terry. This poem is truly a great 'feat of writing!' Keep smiling, Gershon
Flood Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 2:40 PM
I suppose you think that’s punny… ;-)
Bauer Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 1:15 PM
This is adorable, Terry! Made me smile…
Flood Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 1:55 PM
Thanks, Ilene. I don’t know why but I always thought a spider’s two front legs were technically arms. Mr Google told me I’d got that wrong, so a quick rewrite produced this ;-) Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 5:18 AM
This is super cute, Terry. Why don't you write a nursery rhyme for Eve's contest, if you haven't?
Flood Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 5:57 AM
This was meant to be just that… I hadn’t realised it was a picture prompt contest… so I’ll have to have another go. Glad you enjoyed this, Lin. Terry
Cunningham Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 3:52 AM
You're on a roll Terry, an enjoyable read. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Flood Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 9:12 AM
Grrrr… kept trying to enter Eve’s contest…. But guess what silly sod hadn’t read the rules ;-). Glad you enjoyed. Terry
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