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October's Story

The shaking of the big old trees, Pretty colors in the cool breeze Falling leaves coming around me, In October I love to see. From the oven hot apple pie, The cinnamon smell makes me cry. I need a hot pot of mint tea, In October I love to see. How can anyone be sad ~ blue, Always saying to God thank you. Prayer I will give on my knee, In October I love to see

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Silent One

Date: 10/28/2023 10:04:00 AM

This is a lovely poem and you made it flow so well.. I can picture the scene from your words..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/29/2023 11:41:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by. Glad you like my colorful "October's Story" write and can picture my words into a picture/scene. That makes me happy. This time of year, the trees come alive with color. Have a great day/weekend...............

Ink Empress

Date: 10/28/2023 3:06:00 AM

Always expressing gratitude ti God is the way to go, and find inner peace yes. Ah i love those opening lines they are absolutely gorgeous! And so captivating! And i can see through your words and smell cinnamon too! Beautiful october poem this is.wishing you a beautiful day ahead

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/29/2023 11:38:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by. Glad you like my colorful "October's Story" write and found it to be absolutely gorgeous/captivating. I love the smell of cinnamon. Yes, we need to always tell God Thank You... Have a great day/weekend...............

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/27/2023 3:07:00 PM

a truly lovely autumn poem...full of images, sounds and smells. Now I want some hot apple pie with ice cream on it. Yum. Seriously, this was an elegant poem about October. Enjoyed it....have a fabulous Friday evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/28/2023 2:33:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed my colorful "October's Story" and found it to be a truly lovely autumn write. A great time of the year. Have a great day/weekend...............

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/27/2023 11:48:00 AM

A beautiful October story Paula, love the colours of autumn trees, they display an enchanting scene… Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/27/2023 12:49:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by. Glad you like my colorful "October's Story" write. This time of year, the trees come alive with color. Have a great day/weekend...............

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 10/27/2023 10:53:00 AM

A lovely poem for October. Well done.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/27/2023 11:02:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed my "October's Story" write. Have a great day/weekend...............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/27/2023 10:48:00 AM

October's Story ~ Date Written: 10/27/2023