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October Town

OCTOBER TOWN Trees The tall, old trees All must start with the senior thrust of old trees that glorify October Town Well, they are wonderful many and are shapely full From Ellison’s Point one can, except for Baptist spire, barely see October Town for the Midas wealth And when the cruel October light deadly caresses each leaf, Old Solomon’s mines never saw such crust, such rust, such gold Leaves! – spread band stand steps, glorify Town Square, whole town in Persian carpet Yet, still enough Ned Peacher walked down to Edd’s drug store for a fountain coke Same store, all round, his gang visited in 44 Walmart nor other chain store had forced Edd’s out Brill’s Hardware Murray Stationery General Store still there, all freshly painted each year “Change,” whispers the autumn air, but blows quite round October Town Seasons come, people live with quiet dignity The frost, snow and ice all to be greeted with calm, confident love In October Town Dave Austin

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Date: 12/21/2014 10:52:00 AM
Great pictorial in words Daver, is the town so named?? I would assume not' makes no difference though; a great scene and love the folk you describe..'
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Date: 10/18/2014 11:50:00 PM
I love those small towns that never seem to change through the years. I grew up in one, and I still enjoy living there today.... I really liked the nostalgic feel of your poem. A terrific write, Daver!
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Date: 10/17/2014 2:39:00 AM
Oh, love the images here, Daver! '"Old Solomon’s mines never saw such crust, such rust, such gold".:) "Persian carpet"...outstanding!:)) A wonderfully endearing October Town. This week I've been toying with a new poem, reading this ignites my imagination even more. Keep well and wishing you the best! Love, Mikki
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Date: 10/17/2014 9:36:00 AM
Yes! A new poem. I can hardly wait. Love, daver
Date: 10/15/2014 3:49:00 PM
full of nostalgia. Good seeing this one again, my friend. You are a spry guy keeping up here with poems like this one!!
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Date: 10/15/2014 1:28:00 PM
what a beautiful place to live - lovely write, my friend
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Date: 10/15/2014 11:13:00 AM
mellow ramblings that brought me to the scene with a sense of wonder in my heart... this is absolutely splendid, daver.. hugggs
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Date: 10/15/2014 10:22:00 AM
A touching piece. Reflective of where as a people we chose the easy the wrong path along the way. Reminds me of the line in an old song "...you pave paradise to put up a parking lot." Not an exact quote but close. Enjoyed your poem thourouly.
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