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October Sky - Contest



The October sky
spreads rose petals all over-
for you and I

The autumnal love 
pervades the ambience with
crooning of the cranes

Sudden rain cools off-
the nature is in pink with
chirping of the birds

(c) Anindya Mohan Tagore (Bobby)

25/08/2015

loveoctobersensualskyhaiku

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/25/2015 5:26:00 AM

Will do, if you have a chance come visit, perhaps some of my writes will appeal to you.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/18/2015 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations, I see this won in the contest. I developed a form called Questionku which is in the forms section on the soup. Look it up and give it a try, I think you would do it well.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/25/2015 12:04:00 AM

Hello Richard! Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems... feeling blessed. Trying the form developed by you. Please look up and comment to enhance the level of my humble write. Warm regards, Bobby

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2015 12:06:00 AM

this is gorgeous. BIG congratulations.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/12/2015 7:24:00 AM

Thank you Andrea... hugs, Bobby

Len Gasun

Date: 9/9/2015 7:23:00 AM

I extremely love this beautiful chain of haiku of yours my very dear friend, Bobby. I'm so happy to read it tonight. Congratulations as well on your win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/9/2015 8:08:00 AM

Thanks a lot Leonora for visiting my page and for loving my humble write... Poems are meant to be enjoyed by the readers and when it happens, the purpose is served...Much love and hugs, Bobby

Skat A

Date: 9/2/2015 12:05:00 AM

Anindya Mohan Tagore,,, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/2/2015 7:36:00 AM

Thanks a lot SKAT, humbled to know that simple words had touched your soul... Warm regards, Bobby

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/31/2015 5:01:00 AM

Wonderful string of haikus Anindya! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 8/31/2015 9:50:00 AM

Thanks a lot Dr. Sharma, your nice words encourage me a lot. By the way, in which page I can see the result and other winning entries? If you know please give me the link..... Warm regards, Bobby