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Halfway Through October contest sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

                                 October 18, 2023

October drifts on Autumn's breeze. Russet leaves adorn maple trees. Month of lovely weather when we are together, carving scary pumpkins... Oh, geeze!

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Date: 10/22/2023 6:10:00 PM
An impressive Limerick for October and Halloween Lin… Belle
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/22/2023 6:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Belle.
Date: 10/19/2023 11:24:00 AM
what a charming October poem and I love the fun element in the limerick:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/19/2023 11:27:00 AM
lol
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/19/2023 11:25:00 AM
I say Geeze quite a lot. Thanks, Jan.
Date: 10/19/2023 11:16:00 AM
Loved your limerick. I must learn how to make pumpkin soup. Blessings
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/19/2023 11:23:00 AM
I’m more of a pumpkin pie person. Thanks, Victor.
Date: 10/19/2023 8:05:00 AM
A fun one to get me into an October state of mind.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/19/2023 8:25:00 AM
Hi Rich. I’d like to have an October state of mind beginning in August. Lol. Thanks
Date: 10/19/2023 6:01:00 AM
This beautiful poem has a surprise ending, "oh, geez". I love when a poem is 'Amercanized'. Why not? It's current language. You've broadened my horizon.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/19/2023 6:31:00 AM
Thanks, Hilda. Lol at broadening your horizon. What a pleasant comment!!
Date: 10/18/2023 3:18:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write/pretty picture. "Good Luck" I love this time of the year. Wish it would last longer. Have a blessed/peaceful day.........
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/19/2023 6:30:00 AM
My favorite season, too Paula. Thanks for liking this one snd for your wish of luck.
Date: 10/18/2023 4:25:00 AM
Fun and light. Love this Lin. Best wishes for the contest!
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/18/2023 5:38:00 AM
Thank you very much. Karen.

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