October of Crimson Moons

Reflecting colors thru crimson moons,
Parading leaves cuddling while nesting...
Perching birds reminiscing of summer,
Darkening clouds preparing for rains...

Parading leaves cuddling while nesting,
Smelling pumpkins while walking home...
Darkening clouds preparing for rains,
Seasons changing bringing their breezes...

Smelling pumpkins while walking home,
Perching birds reminiscing of summer...
Seasons changing bringing their breezes,
Reflecting colors through crimson moons.


Reversed...
Moons Crimson of October


Moons crimson thru colors reflecting,
Nesting while cuddling leaves parading...
Summer of reminiscing birds perching,
Rains for preparing clouds darkening...

Nesting while cuddling leaves parading,
Home walking while pumpkins smelling...
Rains for preparing clouds darkening,
Breezes, their bringing changing seasons...

Home walking while pumpkins smelling,
Summer of reminiscing birds perching...
Breezes, their bringing changing seasons,
Moons crimson through colors reflecting.




Oct.01.2019
Poet's October Pantoum
Sponsored by: William Kekaula

Music by...Ben Laver
"Plume"...With Female 
Virtual Voice

N/A for contest

autumnchangeoctoberpantoum

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Brenda Chiri

October 3, 2019 at 3:50 PM

Bro bro your still amazing me each write you stun me even more! You and sissy don't play fair you took all the talent and left the other sister to struggle!;) came looking for little puff puff part 2 but I found this beauty!;)

Winged Warrior

October 3, 2019 at 4:30 PM

Not yet sissy...and don't knock yourself down...your verses are as brilliant as ever...and thanks for the comment...always appreciate sisterly love...bro bro :o)

Besma Riabi Dziri

October 3, 2019 at 5:47 AM

A charming October! A highly adept poet painting with so majestic colours the grace of Autumn! A fertile and generous season displayed in your so unique and creative poetry, Winged Warrior! Your poetry is highly remarkable.. Honoured to read up to your soaring imagination.. My deepest regards. God bless you.

Elaine Perrin

October 2, 2019 at 8:53 AM

Wow! I lOVE your beautiful poem. So clever to reverse it and the music goes perfectly :-) x

Alexis Y.

October 2, 2019 at 7:06 AM

WoW! WW, What a lovely Pantoum you have penned in the reverse. This write reflects the "fall" season very well. Top notch imagery and content. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day bro:-) Alexis

Regina Mcintosh

October 1, 2019 at 11:00 PM

This is a beautiful October poem and I hope it wins in the contest. You've done a exceptional job with the words. God bless you always

Debra Squyres

October 1, 2019 at 10:57 PM

Well, you've blown me away !! I was feeling pretty good about my attempt at the form and here you are writing so great then reversing it.... and they are both soooooo good. They really are great !!

Gershon Wolf

October 1, 2019 at 9:26 PM

This poem is amazing without the reversal. With the reversal, I'd say 'superhuman' might be an understatement: WOW! Awesome, my friend. Cheers, Gershon