October Envy

Her radiant beauty crested, wave ebbing,
summer shakes her flowing green free of cooling rains;
yet, stubbornly they linger, gathering
in misty gray garlands about her peaks.

Decay's first browns creep among the flowers,
drab omens of pallid landscapes soon to come.
Vain summer! Water mirrors she left scattered
reflect from every concave surface of the ground.

Fearful of the season's ending glory,
she reaches for a gown only a queen could wear--
parading field and forest in cascading folds of crimson velvet. 
Brilliant oranges, scarlet, gold weave her leafing harvest crown;
Her saffron slippered feet trip down a path of aging green.

Even the moon grows large with October envy,
but he cannot out do her flamboyant display;
his grand act only lasts a moment
compared to summer's pretentious autumnal show.
She hangs on, only brown remaining,
wringing out every vestige of our praise...
until winter comes, ice bragging, to steal the last away.

Copyright, August 28, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/17/2014 7:23:00 AM
Powerful imagery here Faye - loved it immensley. Congratulations
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Date: 9/17/2014 5:34:00 AM
Beautiful Win, Faye
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Date: 9/17/2014 4:53:00 AM
We have winter for a very short period in India, but those moments, Faye. congrats
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Date: 9/17/2014 4:43:00 AM
- A poem that I liked very much, beautifully written Faye !!! - Congratulations on your first place win! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2014 10:07:00 PM
Way to go Faye!!! Congrats
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Date: 9/16/2014 9:25:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem. I love Even the moon grows large with October envy, but he cannot out do her flamboyant display; Brilliant Faye. Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 9/16/2014 7:31:00 PM
Even the moon is envying autumn's display!.... I loved the rich and brilliant imagery in this poem. A wonderful write, Faye! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 9/16/2014 7:18:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/28/2014 10:17:00 PM
oh that bragging winter, it just has to come in and steal the show. how I hate it. YEs, you painted this time of the year beautifully. I feel the melancholy creeping up on me already. Was at the city pool for probably my last time this year and could feel the sun waning.
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Date: 8/28/2014 3:29:00 PM
Dear Faye, although we don't have much of an autumn in Florida, I do remember seeing the leaves change up North when I was growing up. Your wording is brilliant, evoking many images and your style has a special sense of grace to it as well. My the harvest moon shine upon you this year. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2014 2:20:00 PM
wonderful imagery I love the autumn months and its wonderful warm colours. Hugs Jan xxx
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