October Dodoitsu

This one was awesome... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Love the last line! Makes me smile! Each line is colorful and lively! Congratulations!

A very creative dodoitsu dear Andrea, I especially love how you've personified October, and that ending with a Boo, woah.. A very fun-filled and intriguing poem, describes the nature of this month in an impressive way! Congratulations on the well deserved win :)

Dear Andrea, I absolutely loved reading this cute and fun plus lively dodoitsu, so creatively personified using october as a month that flee, with a boo! So fitting for Halloween too! I literally saw october skipping through your word weaving! And how true it is, time flies! Whilst brightly drawing attention, whimsical and profound, yet in various shades of leaves, and colours, the depth of this blew me away! Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS on winning in my contest. Well deserved!

Delightful! Leaves with a Boo...me too~ Boo! Love it! You are such a talented writer. Blessings!

A fun October write. I love this time of the year. "Good Luck" Have a fun weekend...............

Great description of mid-October. Impeccable imagery. Blessings.

- Well done, Andrea ... BOOO - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Andrea, you've created a truly remarkable poem! Beautifully encapsulated both the literal foliage and the act of departing. The subtle intricacies within these few lines transformed them into a vivid and immersive experience, akin to a vibrant scene. Blessings

Great pen here, Andrea! I especially used “leaves” at the end so i could read in its two meanings! These few lines thus felt like an entire scene more than just a sight. Love it! Huge smiles here! xox sally

Love how you put this together! And the last line gave me a chuckle. Is this for contest?

Love the feeling you gave this poem. God bless you.

great personification, indeed, october is such a messenger, enjoyed your poem Andrea

what a fun poem Andrea:-) hugs jan xx