October Dodoitsu

ruddy-cheeked and whimsical October comes skipping in brightly drawing attention then leaves with a BOO

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Silent One

Date: 10/24/2023 12:50:00 PM

This one was awesome... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2023 5:45:00 AM

Love the last line! Makes me smile! Each line is colorful and lively! Congratulations!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/24/2023 5:00:00 AM

A very creative dodoitsu dear Andrea, I especially love how you've personified October, and that ending with a Boo, woah.. A very fun-filled and intriguing poem, describes the nature of this month in an impressive way! Congratulations on the well deserved win :)

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 2:28:00 AM

Dear Andrea, I absolutely loved reading this cute and fun plus lively dodoitsu, so creatively personified using october as a month that flee, with a boo! So fitting for Halloween too! I literally saw october skipping through your word weaving! And how true it is, time flies! Whilst brightly drawing attention, whimsical and profound, yet in various shades of leaves, and colours, the depth of this blew me away! Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS on winning in my contest. Well deserved!

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/21/2023 6:57:00 AM

Delightful! Leaves with a Boo...me too~ Boo! Love it! You are such a talented writer. Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/20/2023 2:26:00 PM

A fun October write. I love this time of the year. "Good Luck" Have a fun weekend...............

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/20/2023 8:19:00 AM

Great description of mid-October. Impeccable imagery. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/20/2023 2:34:00 AM

- Well done, Andrea ... BOOO - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/19/2023 7:40:00 PM

Andrea, you've created a truly remarkable poem! Beautifully encapsulated both the literal foliage and the act of departing. The subtle intricacies within these few lines transformed them into a vivid and immersive experience, akin to a vibrant scene. Blessings

Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/19/2023 6:32:00 PM

Great pen here, Andrea! I especially used “leaves” at the end so i could read in its two meanings! These few lines thus felt like an entire scene more than just a sight. Love it! Huge smiles here! xox sally