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October Collision Course

Delightfully warm tingling golden sunrays
a cool stiff breeze charging from the north
~ rooting for sol the underdog



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 6:44 PM
love the words you used in creating this poem...the simplicity is captivating
Gauthier Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 12:56 PM
"Thanks for your visit and comment. I changed the last line to "rooting for sol the underdog" to make it more obvious."
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