Hija De La Luna Poet Sedoka

October Bliss

At the mountain slopes,
Yellow and red grasses burst
Clouds kiss orange peaks; then roll.

A wistful wind blows
As  autumn sun bathes bare feet -
Sweetness flares, touches the sky.

10.9.14

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Sara Kendrick November 3, 2014 at 5:29 AM Very descriptive and expressive work..Great talent expressed..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Pandita Sietesantos November 1, 2014 at 9:00 AM Yes, you paint such a blissful picture of autumn in October! The imagery is amazing! There is no surprise why this excellent Sedoka is a winner. Congratulations, my friend!!! Pandita

James Fraser October 19, 2014 at 12:19 PM Winters October crafted to appear simply beautiful, lovely poetry, James :)

Maurice Yvonne October 12, 2014 at 6:44 AM This is a gorgeous write. I love it. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Hija De La Luna October 12, 2014 at 9:39 PM Thank you, Maurice, for the visit and lovely words! Gd bless

Jan Allison October 12, 2014 at 5:32 AM am so glad to see you on the winners list many congrats:-) hugs jan xxx Hija De La Luna October 12, 2014 at 9:40 PM thanks, JAn! hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta October 12, 2014 at 1:57 AM Well composed piece on October bliss, Luna. congrats Hija De La Luna October 12, 2014 at 9:41 PM thanks, DR. Ram!

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2014 at 12:32 AM I was really taken with the line: as autumn sun bathes bare feet. SO beautiful. And the whole poem was very pretty. Congrats in my contest. Hija De La Luna October 12, 2014 at 9:42 PM Thanks, Andrea, for the win and the kind words! God bless!

Liam Mcdaid October 10, 2014 at 12:55 PM truly beautifully painted vision hija Hija De La Luna October 12, 2014 at 9:43 PM glad you find it beautiful, liam! God bless!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2014 at 1:24 PM - Ohhh.... a very beautiful poem,Hija ! - Luck in contest!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Hija De La Luna October 10, 2014 at 3:23 AM thank you, Anne!

Jan Allison October 9, 2014 at 11:35 AM lovely personification and imagery good luck in the contest;-) hugs Jan xxx Hija De La Luna October 10, 2014 at 3:24 AM thanks, Jan! hugs back :)