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October Bliss

At the mountain slopes, Yellow and red grasses burst Clouds kiss orange peaks; then roll. A wistful wind blows As autumn sun bathes bare feet - Sweetness flares, touches the sky. 10.9.14

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/3/2014 5:29:00 AM
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Very descriptive and expressive work..Great talent expressed..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/1/2014 9:00:00 AM
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Yes, you paint such a blissful picture of autumn in October! The imagery is amazing! There is no surprise why this excellent Sedoka is a winner. Congratulations, my friend!!! Pandita
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James Fraser
Date: 10/19/2014 12:19:00 PM
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Winters October crafted to appear simply beautiful, lovely poetry, James :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 6:44:00 AM
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This is a gorgeous write. I love it. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/12/2014 9:39:00 PM
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Thank you, Maurice, for the visit and lovely words! Gd bless
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2014 5:32:00 AM
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am so glad to see you on the winners list many congrats:-) hugs jan xxx
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/12/2014 9:40:00 PM
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thanks, JAn! hugs!
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 10/12/2014 1:57:00 AM
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Well composed piece on October bliss, Luna. congrats
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/12/2014 9:41:00 PM
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thanks, DR. Ram!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/12/2014 12:32:00 AM
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I was really taken with the line: as autumn sun bathes bare feet. SO beautiful. And the whole poem was very pretty. Congrats in my contest.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/12/2014 9:42:00 PM
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Thanks, Andrea, for the win and the kind words! God bless!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/10/2014 12:55:00 PM
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truly beautifully painted vision hija
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/12/2014 9:43:00 PM
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glad you find it beautiful, liam! God bless!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2014 1:24:00 PM
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- Ohhh.... a very beautiful poem,Hija ! - Luck in contest!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/10/2014 3:23:00 AM
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thank you, Anne!
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2014 11:35:00 AM
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lovely personification and imagery good luck in the contest;-) hugs Jan xxx
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/10/2014 3:24:00 AM
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thanks, Jan! hugs back :)

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